| Reviews for Affluent & Penniless |
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   vampirelady13 chapter 5 . 6/16 Your chapters are not even a chapter. There just a couple of sentences I don't read story's where the writer makes Charlie out to be a bad parent . |
| um what chapter 262 . 8/30/2019 what, what, what, what... sorry, forget myself for a minute. Thought I was mackelmore. Okay... now, back to what? Because what is real? What is happening? Tanya tries to kill Edward in Bella's hospital room and then she's found later in a car with Renee. That had to be shortest prison stay ever. And Bella and Edward are in love in like what? 3 days? Married in a week? Almost killed twice? What? What? Yeah, Mackelmore keeps slipping in. Like really, what? And then she goes to meet her dad who surely is a good man that she was kept from and what's the first thing he does? Oh wait ... yeah, threaten her life. So, yeah, what? what? what? what? ... that song is in a loop in my head. You got such great potential with this story if you could just do a little fine tuning. |
| Gabstastic chapter 1 . 11/19/2017 Let me get this straight... 1. it’s completed. 2. It’s nominated in twifanfictionrecs... 3. Oh well... |
| TwiFanfictionRecs chapter 1 . 11/4/2017 Affluent & Penniless has been nominated in the poll to find the Top 10 fics completed in October at www . twifanfictionrecs . com |
| NeeNee246 chapter 262 . 10/30/2017 OHFORFECKSAKES! Her entire family is a whole can of nuts! WHY THE F*CK WOULD THEY NOT GET THE AUTHORITIES INVOLVED! smh! :/ |
| Yvicuna chapter 262 . 10/29/2017 What? That's the end? |
| debslmac chapter 262 . 10/27/2017 Wow! Charlie was just as bad as Renee! Loved this story |
| Crazy89 chapter 262 . 10/27/2017 What in the world, I’m lost? Was this it? Am I reading this correctly, is it really marked complete? |
| dazzleglo chapter 262 . 10/27/2017 OMG, how terrible that Charlie did that to Bella. I loved this story, hope there is more to come at some point. |
| mums garden chapter 262 . 10/27/2017 What nooooo... Please say there will be a sequel, it can't end like that, I really hoped she would get a happy ending. Love your stories |
| foxylady1on1 chapter 262 . 10/27/2017 could you not give bella one half descent perant? lol hope you continue this or write a sequal. thanks x |
| neelix lee chapter 262 . 10/27/2017 Poor Bella both she and Edward need some good luck. Hope there may be more |
| detsinbaby chapter 262 . 10/27/2017 WOW. WTH. You made Charlie in2 a dushe |
| Guest chapter 262 . 10/27/2017 Awwwwwww no way it can’t be the end! I’m gonna miss this story. Are you gonna continue it in another story? If so I’ll be sitting on nails while waiting lol. I loved this story and have your others on my TBR list. Thank you for the awesome story! Keep up the great work! |
| Angelface12 chapter 262 . 10/27/2017 Loved the story. |
