ignoring the "shamefur dispray"(i laughed, being honest here), this was...quite good, heck this was even better than the other one (the one with less memes and more WORDS), so yeah, good work.

At least it has become more coherent! Just when I had that thought you hit me with that "Herro" and I died... I'm a wraith now, forever bound to the physical realm until a forceful demise falls upon my undead being and forever limited to constantly live the last and final emotion I ever experienced- UNCONTROLLABLE RAGE!

Gr8 m8

This was great. I mean, minus the fact that Hachiman basically told Hiratsuka-sensei that she may have the blue waffle or his father's "Engrish", this was good. If you only wrote more serious stories, I'm sure you'd make ones that would be hits. Too bad we can't have it all. Still, I found this beautiful so I salute to you.

shekels that was beautiful

Hahaha nice XD

So he is dead because the train, that mean there isn't any continue story right?
Then what we suposed to imagine? Saitama joining the story and save him?