Loved it! You could start a series :)

way enjoyable story to read

Brilliant story - shame you're not going to continue with it. Like the touch about Hetty adopting Dana. You could go places with that one. Was Callen adopted too? Never mind, it was a truly good read and well written.

French fan
It was a Wonderful story.

It would have been a shame not to post it

Hey! Nice job on this! I haven't watched much NCIS LA, but your story makes me enjoy the premise of it more! Your OC was a great addition, friend! :) Love ya!

Whoa! :D