Percy x Annabeth for life!

Read this for an hour straight! Although the plot can get a little confusing at times, with all those flashbacks and all, I still love it! The plot keeps my eyes stuck my screen, and I could go on, and on.
Keep on going, my friend! (though not really...)

Woah.

Wtf is going on? I mean, I fucking love this, but, omfg, this is crazy! YOU ARE FANTASTIC!

Don't listen to the guest(s) hating on your story. It's amazing and I NEED for it to be updated! Please continue this!

I stop here, because fuck this story and it making any sense. And fuck all the people who are blowing smoke up your ass and refusing to offer any form of criticism. This guardian shit, turned me off from this story real hard.

Sea shell bullshit still hasn't come back up. Have you just completely dropped that or some shit? Jesus fucking christ.

Wait a minute... so they think of the sea shell thing... and yet after three weeks, THEY STILL DON'T FUCKING CONFIRM IT, DESPITE IT BEING SET UP? ARE YOU DAFT? Fuck me.

Also, I AM going to leave a review telling you this is all wrong. Being a fanfiction doesn't exempt you from making sure your story makes SENSE. So the tattoo, a roman tattoo, something that is very well assosicated with ROME, is just randomly used for "mercenaries"? That makes no fucking sense. You tied it in in no way at all and tried defending it AS YOU WROTE THE CHAPTER, which ANs in the middle of the chapters are annoying as fuck. And how exactly did Voldemort fight Percy? By the point he had supposedly fought Percy, he'd still be trying to find a way to bring himself back to a proper body, not fighting. And you seem to have completely forgot the sea shell thing you set up in the first chapter, as instead of the two discovering who they are to each other right away, they forget about the shell, despite being written as being on the same wavelength, which makes the hallway scene worse as by Percy's logic, he SHOULD be allowed to take her away to spend time with her, because he is no stranger. Fuckin hell. If I find more like this throughout the story this will be FUN.

So I feel you need to know a few things. One, always put dialogue from different characters into their own chapter. Never put two or more characters dialogue into the same chapter.

Two is a little thing... basically, Hermione being 5'5 and Percy being 6'0. This would make him seven inches taller than her, not five.

Update!

Lovin it keep it up

you can't apperate/disapperate in Hogwarts

when will hte next update be?

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW MSHSMHSMHSMHSMHMSHMSHMH

ALSO HAPPY BIRTHDAY! HOPE YOU'VE HAD A GREAT DAY! BEST WISHES!

And of course I'd stick with you! This story is so amazing, how could I not? Anyways, I loved this chapter! And YES WE GOT TO SEE POSEIDON AND HE LOOKS AMAZING AND HE SOUNDS LIKE THE PERFECT DAD AND I JUST WANT TO HUG EVERYONE MSHSMHMSHSMHS

Also yes! We got to see all the main characters too! ANd please please pleaseeeeeee can we have Solangelo? Just one itsy bitsy hint. Pleaseee. And Wowowoowow they raised Bianca and Nico? Oof I can't wait until we find out more about that! And yes, that is how you spell Clarisse. I am liking the mention of Bianca. And oof. We found out so much in this short chapter! I can't. This was amazing! And I am stoked for the next one! Bye!