Aaah! Amazing ending, I just hope to be able to read more soon!

Ooh are you still working on this? Because it does say in your notes in the first chapter that you have it pretty much planned out. It would be lovely to read the whole work but then it’s yours, and beggars can’t be choosers. As always, your standard of work is remarkable.

Ahhhhhhhh (yes she can keep a secret) oml

AHHHHHH, so cute!

OH MY FRIEKIN GOSH. More. Need. More. BRILLIANTLY done. I cannot wait to see what happens next. Keep up the awesomeness...

Holy fudge. Was wondering which one would cave and transform first.

I think the summary was pretty funny! I also really like that you distinguished texts from speech, it's really annoying when people don't so thanks for that. I'm curious to see where this plot line will take us!

Please update soon, this is amazing and that was one heck of a clifdhanger.

This is very sweet. I wonder what he is nervous about.

Wow. You. Just murdered me. Thanks. Didn't need to live. JEEZ DUDE HE JUST UP AND WHIPPED OUT THE CHAT LIKE WTF. I'm sorry. I know this doesn't make any sense. Love this though, please keep it up, I really love the way you write

Something that nearly happened but I stuffed my hand in my mouth to cover the noise in time:
It's 23:41: my mother is sleeping in her room. Suddenly, she hears a scream and runs into my room.
- Is something wrong? she asks.
- OMG ADRIEN JUST TRANSFORMED IN FRONT OF MARINETTE MY OTP HAS FINALLY COME TRUE LADYNOIR LADRIEN ADRINETTE AND MARICHAT HAVE FINALLY SAILED
- I'm... just gonna go now.
A few minutes later, my mom is on the phone:
- Yes, I'd like the police to come arrest my daughter: I'm scared for the creators of Miraculous if Adrien doesn't end up with Marinette.

Okay that last part might not have happened

This is CUTE! I love the NinoxAlya in this too. CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! Ps is this a reveal fic? Coz its only the first chapter but you've somehow managed to build it up to a really intense scene already! Like, wow!