Love the trial of the fanfiction !

I LOVED IT! Tamer is now a Kid and I'm going out on a wild guess and saying that this Tamer is Takato. I loved this chapter and it was a brilliant wrap up to this chapter in the Tamer saga. Humour was fantastic, Tamer saved Ken and Mimi got her revenge. Tina showed up again :D thank you for that and now I'm all caught up. I cant with for the next part and I'll admit it, I cried...too similar to 10 (TT_TT) I'll see you in the next one. Bye Leo, fantastic story

(TT _TT) The Poor Kids. Poor, Poor kids...I love it! You wrote this beautifully and I'm kicking myself for delaying this wonderful chapter. Well written, nice emotion, great characters and Davis made a miracle! I won't write about all of the dreams but they worked and they were amazing. I love that they went to their DNA partners to save them. Cody's dad was brilliant and so true to who he was and there was also humer in here so that was great. Favourite chapter, hands down. One more to go, see you at the finish line!

I HATE Myotismon! How could he do that to all of the kids? Mainly Cody, the poor kids have been through enough. This just shows that once again Leo, you have written an amazing chapter and character.

I do love the fact that Tamer is watching over the battle but not interfering. He wants them to be able to win a fight on their own and succeed without his help so they can survive without him. He shows he cares and this doesn't come from Destiny but wanting to see them grow. WarGreymon is concerned and wants to help them now but is agreeing with Tamer with much uneasiness. It shows that he believes in Tamer but would prefer to help out now. I also love that little cheer from Tamer.

I love the different realities of the kids and how it plays into their characters. Kari just wants a Tai back but he's still Tamer, only his willing to be her brother. T.K. wants everything to be over and loves having his family over. Davis has Kari and feels something is off and so on. It's nice to see this differ from the show's illusions. I can't wait to see how it plays out!

Once again it's a beautiful chapter and I can't wait to read the next two! see you next time Leo!

I hate Myotismon sooooooo much right now! Ph he's a basted! I love this chapter! my favourite so far! Why? I like seeing characters go through trials and this is the beginning on them. I can't wait to see how they get out of this!

Myotismon hit all of the hard spots for the kids and I have to say I love this part. It was well written and it would be hard to fight against a person that looks like a loved one.

I like that Tamer wants them to win and do this without him. It works with his character and he does care but he also knows that he can't always be there to help them. also, love WarGreymon's uncertainty with Tamer's belief. Also loved that little cheer

I love the different illusions and how different they are from the show. I love how each character has a perfect world they want but will never happen.

Two more to go and I'll see you in the next one! Bye Leo!

FINALLY! I have read this chapter and I'll read the others as well. only 3 more to go. I once again don't have a lot to say on this chapter but that could have to do with my sickness.

I love that Ken tried to talk to the other children before they went after them. I find it to be a nice touch for Ken to do that and a nice show of his character.

Davis got into trouble even though he didn't do anything. I do like how you handle that situation. Good job.

BlackWarGreymon found peace. I really liked that for some reason. It sounded like a nice Island. I also love that he tried to protect the Digital World and in the end sealed up the weak area within reality and got outside. it was in character of how you wrote BlackWarGreymon and I really enjoyed it.

I love the chapter and it was fun to read.

Now on to the good stuff..or what I found most interesting in this chapter. Sam was mentioned from Ken and that was nice to hear but the other three lines... So the "Why don't you join me" line is interesting. was the Myosimon? Or was it Oikawa? or someone else? "Find your way out! That is the test!" Ok, this has to do with Tamer right? maybe when he was becoming an Ancient? The last one was "Sora! Sora!" was that Tai? back before Tamer existed? I wonder. I think a nice touch would have been to add the Whistle blow that Tai did to wake up Greymon since that started this whole story, but that's just my opinion.

Well, good chapter and I'll see you in the next one! Have a good one Leo!

OMG! I just got the FFN app and it can read the stories to you! what the hell? Why have I only just discovered this?

Anyways, liked this chapter, Leo! I'm glad I finally got to it now that I can listen to the stories I can get through them at a better rate.

I really enjoyed the hospital scene. It showed how mad T.K. was and it was a nice way to add in Dr Kido. I never thought I'd read a story where Matt would punch T.K. but it came off as the same punch that Matt gave Tai in the show. It was nicely done.

Poor Izzy. We all know he's married to his laptop so that would have been really hard to have to rip apart and put back together. Lucky for him he had Yolei and Ken there to help him. I enjoyed their interactions and how they teased each other about their feelings to certain people. Always count on the digimon to make fun of you.

I also enjoyed the interaction with Davis and the reporters. It added some realism to the story and also showed how annoying it could be to be followed around and constantly asked questions you don't want to answer. I also enjoyed that Davis picked up on what was going on with the kidnapped kids faster than his canon self would have.

I also enjoyed how misguided Noriko was about the entire situation. Bringing order to the Digital World isn't as simple as they are making it out to be. Enjoying her character and looking forward to moreNO! I don't want to say goodbye to Tai Tamer soon! But this was my favourite part. BWG did bring up the fact that Tamer lies a lot, and I don't blame the guy. I mean it would be hard to keep up what he's doing and it's hard on only two people. Tamer was willing to share BWG destiny but BWG chose to go his own path. No many people would do that. Amazing character development and more info on Tamer and his role as a Digital Agent.

Love the slow chapter. Its needed to have these in the story so the reader can have a break from the action. Loved this chapter and I'll see you in the next one!

This was great! Thanks for writing!

Woohf. That's the noise my brain made on finally catching up. WOOHF. I don't even know what it means but there it is.

What a wild ride. Half glad for the break before the next one. (But also half "what do you mEAN THERE ISN'T MORE?" )

Wonderful story you,be done it again thanks for writing it

awesome ending, just awesome, got teary eyed in the ending sequences. is the very last paragraph of the story referencing you? is tai still part of his continouty or is he going to some other world?

Maldita sea, amo a Tamer planes locos... Llore con el final pero estoy feliz de ver el final. Ahora solo falta esperar a leer la próxima temporada pero falta varios, muchos meses para que salga, sin más que decir planteare mis teorías.

I admit I am upset that you put Davis in relation with Kari only to break them up. But when I think about it the relation that doesn't work but at least on speaking term still have beautiful in it own way so I decide to not get mad so much about it. (still little upset.)
I don't like fight scene with MaloMyotismon much. It's look too easy and doesn't make so much sense. I mean Ultimate digimon attack didn't work but simple firework did? I understand you want human partner to participate in the fight but come on! The light from digivice likes Tamer like to use make more sense to me.
Speak of Tamer I don't like his death scene. It felt little too convenient and too rush make it look like an escape ploy for me (like he did at the end of first story.)
So much critizism this time but I really enjoy your story so see you in new year. (Why 4 months feel so long...)
P.S. I never watch Doctor Who so it's little confuse for me.

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Interesting ending. I wasn't expecting the Tamer to have to sacrifice himself like that. So are you planning to do Digimon Tri with the Tamer or something?