Reviews for The Sun Also Rises
karinuuzumaki chapter 1 . 4/30
I am glad to found this fsnfiction, because I've been searching for narusaku fanfiction that the story focus on them traveling or having a trip or holiday. This story fits, and I am a happy reader! It's even more satisfying to see that Naruto actually planned it for them to literally walk down memory lane. It's somehow a nice triggers for Sakurs to contemplate her feelings towards Naruto. Although sadly we don't get many view on Sakura's contemplation on her conflicted feelings (since it mainly just appear and discussed on the cave scene).
Also idk why but I feel their talk in the cave is not quite thorough. At first Sakurs was still conflicted with her feelings, but few minutes later she then proceed to made up her mind and talk about her feelings with Naruto. Don't get me wrong, I'm glad that it happened and it's still a great scene, however I just feel like their conversation can be more deep. Regardless, I think I should be thankful that at least you made it a happy ending. That's a total relief!
Anyway, thank you for writing and sharing this with us. Reading this story really put a smile on my face, and also really warms my heart! I enjoyed reading this so much.
SkullVenom chapter 1 . 7/8/2019
i like this one shot very realistic
Silverman1212 chapter 1 . 4/25/2019
this was great , just seems confusing at times , and that ending was great , just hoped they kissed at least . well it was great still.
preservedpearls chapter 1 . 1/4/2019
This is so heartwarming, aw they are truly perfect for each other. Thank you for writing this! 3
Guest chapter 1 . 9/2/2018
Lovely..
zid95thanad chapter 1 . 9/1/2017
thank you for writing this beautiful story...naru-saku will always be my otp...
Bree chapter 1 . 8/30/2017
This was beautiful! It felt really organic and true to the characters. Nothing super dramatic or forced...just a stroll down memory lane while enjoying one another.
Naruto was mature yet unpredictable, Sakura was conflicted, but didn't revert back to being ignorant and utterly self involved. Compassionate, learned the art of letting go, and just naturally soft.

I like that she came to a conclusion subconsciously before recognizing it consciously.

Her and Naruto just naturally fell together like they've should've...~sighs~

I miss when Naruto was honest and had balls...this should've been the ending.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2017
Brilliant
Guest chapter 1 . 5/11/2017
Wow another great story Im liking all your stories! I hope all of them get updated soon and this break isn't too long!
Jwake chapter 1 . 5/8/2017
A very tender little one shot that delt with emotions more than plot. I quite like it.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/30/2017
What a beautiful beautiful story! Narusaku should've ended up together even if I do support sasusaku. They're just perfect ! Thank you for the story!
alexandraanda7 chapter 1 . 4/21/2017
You really should send your precious work to Masashi! It's so beautiful!
LimJJ chapter 1 . 4/17/2017
im pretty much done with Naruto after the ending. I dont even care wats happens in the boruto series lol. Like u i make narusaku stories and this story was cute. However it needee abit more fluff
Guest chapter 1 . 4/16/2017
Super cute. I loved that it tied in with ger birthday too. Great job, please don't stop writing NaruSaku we need more fics like this.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/8/2017
This really made me smile. What a beautiful piece of work. I wish this was how it ended. Great ~
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