Great story

I especially love these stories about their first time together (and there are lots in this world of fanfiction). I always admire the way you get them together, this time as Deeks as a stripper. Very clever Moose. I'm always amazed at how these two seem to fit together perfectly. Thank you for another wonderful "M" story, Moose.

I do love your stories!

yep, still got it,
perfect

Honestly i lost alot of respect for her character when she laughed about what deeks had to do to get by he was supportive of her hard times and she just out right laughed at his.

Shes a ahit girlfriend who never puts him or his feelings first laughs or ignores him when his opening up about his feelings and hits him when shes got no come back or doesn't get her own way.

Shes CONTROLING and ABUSIVE

love it that you picked that topic about his job back up

Prettty good I liked it..

wow, wow, finally some good smut that is smart and funny and hot. Thank you for your both stories. You honestly made my both days when I read them. Welcome to NCIS LA Densi fandom and I hope we will be honoured with more stories from you to read.

UH, this was great ! I loved the teasing between them, sometimes I miss it ! thanks for sharing !

Funny, Sultry, Excellent.

Both your fanfics are great and hot ;) please write more

Definitely the preferred and perfect ending to the episode. Very well done!

holy crap...
that is just fantastic.
funny enough, i always imagined that he would give her a private dance...nicely done.
I assume there 6 or 7 hundred of these "missed opportunities" stories to post, so you better get a head start. one every other day or so would be a good place to start.
I love the way you portray their relationship, the interaction in in character even though they have moved into more adult done
it is nice to see the characters, in character, just acting on their feelings instead of hiding them.
love it,
thank you