I'm rally interested in this story and feel like it has good potential and would be excited to see where it's heading. But, all that random coding or whatever makes it impossible to read the second chapter. You probably already know about it, but I thought I'd say something just in case.

Awww thank you for the dedication! The idea of Jyn in modern day London is fascinating and I've always loved the Jyn/Han dynamic. Looking forward to reading more and for Cassian to make an appearance :)