NepNowa Unigear, C'mon people in this fic Nepgear will be ship Noire. Maybe Noire will grew out of her crush and date Nepgear instead.

This was a good story, I like Neptune x Uni, reading this was inspiring.

This was nice story mate

Only thing I didn liked at the finale is that Nepgear was somehow left out in the resolution, like, Nep and Uni make her feelings towards each other clear, Noire accepts them as long as they re happy but Nepgear only locks herself in her workshop, withouth any closure, feels weird, even if this only focused in the NepxUni shipping

That was an emotional ride. Let me start off by saying I'm a Unigear shipper. So I might of added some biased heartache to the metaphorical rollercoaster. More on this later. I enjoyed Uni's character here quite a lot: seeing her come out of Noire's shadow. I also like how you tackled Noire differently this time. In the switcheroo I felt like Noire's side of the story didn't fit in with any of the characters. I think Noire's crush on Neptune does make sense considering how the fandom views the two. Cute too. I understand why Neptune would reject her in this case but I feel like it would be the other way in canon. I view Neptune as a polyamorous lesbian so I'm not against shipping her with Uni. I always like how they interact in the game so I like reading other peoples' interpretations. Considering how close Nepgear is with the two, I don't think Neptune and Uni would leave her out of the relationship. I don't know why you could think kissing someone will be an effective way of warming someone's internal body temperature. Looks like Neptune has more in common with Verty than she lets on. I like how you added a hidden layer of Uni and Nepgear's relationship. Uni did admit she liked Nepgear at one point. I have two ideas for what happened between the two: Either, Uni slowly drifted away from Nepgear due to stress. This is why she didn't return Nepgear's texts. This causes Nepgear to retaliate by locking herself in her workshop and working on the new Neptank. Or, Uni and Nepgear had an argument which caused the two to fall out. Nepgear wanted to make amends but Uni has moved on now. Then Nepgear makes antimatter bombs disguised as robots; No wonder Histoire fainted. I did like the Neptank scenes with Nepgear but you missed an opportunity by skipping over Noire's talk with Nepgear about Uni. I find it a bit too unrealistic that Noire would be so accepting of Neptune and Uni's relationship. She's already feeling resent at Uni for the previous fight for Lastation and now Uni's taking Neptune too. Also, she doesn't have the most open personality considering she's a tsundere. There are some spelling errors here and there. There is also one moment when Uni is deciding who to take with her on the quest: I don't think the paragraph makes it clear why she can't take Vert. I though what you are going for but I couldn't derive it from the sentence. Overall, the fic was good and written well. I do like seeing Uni and Neptune interact. I would like to see Uni and Nepgear having conversations though.

A couple I've never even considered as viable. Interesting. Though I'm not sure you've sold it well enough for me to believe they'll last.

Well. That was one heck of a ride. Nice read.

Though the events shift too fast. I can understand because it's a one-shot story but it wouldn't hurt to slow down a bit, aye cap'n?

Another thing. Watch out for the "than" and "then", " where" and "we're", " your" and "you're". You tend to switch them alot.

Anyways, so nice to see someone ship Nep and Uni too. Well, can't spell Neptunia without Nep and Uni.

/runs

Another great story from you! You can really feel the magic of love between Uni and Neptune here. And yeah, you feel kinda sorry for Noire here... Still, well written NepuUni melts me like Uni's kiss. Looking forward for your next story

UnixNeptune, even though I ain't one to ship. This pairing is honestly a personal favorite of mine. It breaks the huge molds of all the NepNowa and Unigear ships, which became old to me.

I personally thank you for this. This is the second fic I believe that is Neptune and Uni I read and thoroughly enjoyed.

This is so good! Way better than Neptune/Noire or Nepgear/Uni, this pair is different yet it realyl works out as you have cleverly put the scenes together, very enjoyable!

Please don't cry Noire, I'm sure Uni is up for a threesome as long as love isn't involved.

This story will be a waste if it turned into a one shot.

Moar PLZ

There simply is not enough Neptune/Uni stories, this one was really nice. Pretty awesome both of them supported each other at different times and really made things go together great.