I really really liked the concept very much although it did not feel like a mafia story at all more apocalyptic/supernatural.

Too funny the last sentence and a good one. It's a good one shot and I'm sure you will get many reviews. Thanks for your writing.

Thanks!

Very unique story I hope you continue.

I like!

I love this! It's fantastic!

Surprising OS. Well written, easy to read. Thank you.

Excellent take on the prompt. I enjoyed your characterisations and especially Edward's enhanced powers were very believable. The eyes were a nice touch.

Thank you for grinding Jacob to dust *two thumbs up* immediately. That was superb.

Thank you for sharing your entry. I hope you consider continuing it! -RoseE. x

This was great! Extremely well written, and a very interesting take on the mafia prompt. Plus, such a fun spin on Vampward! I really enjoyed reading this! Thank you for entering the contest, and super extra thank you for giving us a complete, fully fleshed out one-shot. I can't even tell you how much I appreciate that! It makes reading contest entries a lot more fun. Especially with an ending as good as yours! I loved the last line. Lol. A perfect ending that left me smiling. Thank you! :)

I knew that someone would do a vamp/mafiaward,, well done. I enjoyed it and I hope you will continue it. Thank you!

I enjoyed the different take on mafiaward. Thanks for writing. Good luck.

Nice story. Would like to see this continue. Thanks for entering contest and god luck

Great story, wasn't sure about it but I totally loved it. Thanx for entering the contest and good luck. If you so choose to extend this, I will gladly read that as well. ;o)

This was definitely different,hope you continue it...

Definitely different and an interesting concept!