Just finish this story today at 6:00 in morning I wish be sleepy for my job but it’s so worth being tired. Like another reviewer wrote interesting story aways thought of ruby as Qrow kid rather then tie.

interesting story

Hey not sure who I am rooting for in shipping but I like the update

Actually getting around to logging in to post this time.

Glad to see you took my advice. Made it quite a bit easier to follow dialogue. Looking forward to seeing more.

Always liked Ruby as Qrow's kid. Also, quick grammatical tip. Two different characters should never communicate within the same paragraph. If a new character starts talking either verbally or mentally, a new paragraph should start.

fuck you too Qrow

hmm interesting twist on the ending. I do look forward to reactions and to see your pairings.

you are doing a great job with the story so far

I skipped mostt of the chpter went down to the bottom and I saw "when were you going to tell me I was your daughter" and then went up a little and saw " I love you dad" I am currently going to go flip the hell out