Hello ! I don't know if you will read this review (or if you will be able to see it since I wrote it from my phone and don't know if it will work). I want to apologize because it may be a long rambling and my english is not good (I mean I'm not a native speaker and it may have mistakes).

At first, I was planning to review each chapter after having completely read your story. To tell you I love how you describe Yuugi's mother(she is my hero), her relationship with Atem and Yuugi, aka the two dorkiest dorks of Domino(I think with all the dorks who lived ther, the city should be called Dorkmino). To write a "HOW DARE YOU" when the puzzle have been scattered by Atem. Or how I got some looks because I was so excited when Yugi solved the Puzzle or/and when Atem got his body (which how the series should have end but it's my opinion). How all characters seems... Well, in character. Someone could adapt your story in an official Yugioh serie and I wouldn't spot a difference. But, actually I decide to change my plans. Because thanks to your story I began to cry. And maybe not where I would expect it.

I won't lie. I almost yell when Atem FINALLY realize he have feelings for Yuugi. The way you put it, it was the most beautiful way to describe someone who fell in love. Specially the part of "being a part of someone's happiness". It just make me smile like a child. I really loved the fact it's Honda, not Anzu or Jounouchi, who help Atem to realize his feelings. In other stories I read Honda and Atem barely talked to each other. So to see them having this kind of conversation was a good surprise (and I love the way you write Honda. It feel like he is the big brother of the gang.

I also facepalmed myself many times when Atem and Yuugi decided to just... Turn in circle. "Maybe he don't love me this way", "Maybe I'm hurting him". Oh gosh ! I was so frustrated ! Thanks to Yuugi's friends vecause finally we got the big "declaration". And now I just started to cry when FINALLY they talked and they are officially 'a couple' now. And it's not just the fact who make me cry. It's the way you describe it. I never read something before which make me feel something like that. The way they looked at each other (even before they discovered their feelings for each other), the way they praise each other, the way they just... act when they are together. I had never be in love before and don't think I will but as I was reading your story, your poetic description just hit my heart and for a moment I just thought I would like to find someone who will love me like Atem love Yuugi or Yuugi love Atem. Pretty silly, isn't it? I know it's just a story and reality may not be like that but, well, it's why we read stories after all. To dream and wonder about things.

Anyways, it's really a good story ! No, it's not a good story. It's a really really nice story. And since I'm only at the forteenth chapter. So I think I will have to find a better word than 'nice' if I put another review. Thank you, thank you for this beautiful story and for your hard work. And again sorry for my long and making-no-sense review. And for all the english grammatical mistakes I made. Have a nice day (or night)

P.S : I'm just being curious here but why Yuugi's mum call her son "Yuugi-kun"? Correct me if I'm wrong but I always heard "-kun" is more for ... like for classmates, people from work so I'm surprised she use "-kun" for her own son. Or maybe she is the sister of Sakura's father from Card Captor Sakura ? Joke aside, I'm really curious about it )

Just wanna say love ur story so far. Atem and Yugi interactioms give me life. I loved how slowly u went with their relationship from friends to boyfriends. Also I cant wait for u to start that other fanfic of yours which u are gonna rewrite. Again love ur work

I don't blame you. This site's been a cesspool since the adult fiction purge of '03.

I really hope Atem and Yugi will confess to each other so Atem won't need to leave.

The palms of my hands hurt because I was clenching them in anguish at their endless pining, stop it you idiots, just talk! I'm DYING HERE! I am suffering with them, god the moment- if they do- kiss I'm going to scream to the high heavens in victory. thank you for the chapter I'm feeling many things rn

oh the feelings in this chapter, LOVED IT.

I guess Atem will end up angry at Honda for pointing his feelings out since he would prefer not knowing

I'm not sure how I managed to miss this story, but on the plus side that meant I got to read the first eight chapters in one go. Then read chapter nine today and oh my God! You absolutely have a talent for writing the most heart pounding scenes, I was torn between reading as quickly as I could to see what happened and reading slowly so I could savour each emotion Atem and Yuugi went through. I think the scene between the two of them when Yuugi wakes up is one of my top five moments in your works for sure! Absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter.

I loved this last chapter. No one ever writes Atem/Honda interaction. Not even the author and it's a shame because I like Honda as a character. I think he adds a lot to the group.

Ringu's based off a book? Wow!

Please update

Thanks for allowing Atem to keep his name. It really irks me when people have him forsake his name and ask people to call him Yami or Yugi.

Wow this is incredibly well written. So far one of the best "Atem stays after the fight and has his own body" fics I've read. I'm going to keep reading this.

LE GASP! Honda knows! But he is coming off as he doesnt approve. Oh my gosh this was such a sweet chapter. Seeing them have so much fun was the best part and the taunts Atemu and Yugi did...perfect! I laughed a lot on this chapter

I love it! Keep up the good work!