I have enjoyed every single chapter of this story!

If anything, the only thing that's really missing is Sanji, because he would've stumbled across the East Blue within the next year. and in about two years Arlong... Just... This story has really caught my attention, and despite the super long chapters, I love this story. I really hope that you enjoy writing this as much as I do reading it. I've had to take breaks because I got burned out, but last night... I really had the feels, needed a hug from a friend even. This semi touches base with me, and reminded me of some things, but that's all good. I can't wait to see where you take this. Keep it up

Please, post a new chapter.

And please, post your story on spacebattles, we need of something else than the fanfictions like "This bites".

Oh my god! I'm giggling like a loon, whilst grinning like a psycho! I know that it's only the first chapter but I'm so excited to read more!

So. I definitely cried, and all I have to say is please update soon.

Oh god, you know its a good story when you start crying from it.

Holy shot this chapter hit me hard, so emotional loved and hated it with equal parts hope you continue to keep it up.

Great writing. Loved it. Hope you continue

I definitely felt like crying really hard. My emotions are a mess and now I will go read a more happy fanfic right now. Keep up the great work!

I hope you haven't given up on this story because it is gorgeous. This is one of the few I'm willing to wait for years and possibly decades to update and finish because it is just that good. I have never personally faced a loss like Selena and the other characters have, though I fear I may soon, with my grandparent's dwindling health.
This is really amazing and doesn't have the same angst over the storyline changing that drove me away from many stories. Selena, although she is scared of changing the story, she doesn't go out of her way to not interact with Garp or Nami or Nojiko. She accepts it as they come into her life. I love how Garp is such a doting grandfather and how the little changes Selena makes with her presence has such an impact in the overall story. You have a great balance of fluff and humor with slight angst. I'm absolutely adore how this is really fluffy and humourous with a side of angst unlike other angst angst and more angst stories. I honestly cannot wait until canon, when Selena will meet more canon characters; hopefully, Luffy and Selena may finally meet.

This has been the first time I have ever cried at a character death. Your story is very well written. Thank you for the new experience and goodluck with more amazing stories

This is a really good story - idk if you’re still continuing it anymore (I think I first read this a few years back, but suddenly remembered it and reread it today? Lol) but I just thought I’d let you know you have a very nice writing style, and the way you’ve structured the story is really unique from a lot of other OC fics I’ve read. Anyway, have a good one :)

You've really done the emotions in this chapter well, had a few tears in my eyes almost the entire chapter. Well Done

Too bad this story's dead, I really like it.

PS: Author-san, if you don't like me saying your story is dead then prove me wrong.

Re-read. Again. This might be the third or fourth time. It's still just as amazing as when I first read it. Aagh, now I'm craving for more! Truly beautiful. I hope you update sometime.