I like the story so far. Are you planning on updating it?

love this story. but i'm wonder if you have problem on your story?

Please continue this story and how many girls will be added to this hearm

so will the harem have any other girls like certain gym leaders or frontier brain or champions im so hoping especially since we have an oc twin

but the power nice nice why would he act dull or dim or dense from the start of his journey if he wasnt 5 years before if he hadnt would he have won each league?

Great story! Update soon!

Good story, can't wait till next update. Please don't make the harem crazy big. These 4 with maybe 2 more should be the limit

hope a new chapter comes out soon.

Amazing story so far can't wait for the next update.

Great to see ash finally revieal himself to his friends again after so long being away from them ash should tell them why he's been gone for so long it's better to at least tell his friends what's going on instead of keep it all bottled up if he tells them it can get rid of that extra weight off His shoulders as for the hearm I say misty may dawn Mallow Lille Lana miette Shauna lyra Hilda Rosa melody Zoey Ursula and bianca (johto region altomare)

Great chapter I'm happy to see ash finally decided to show himself to his friends that have been waiting for him for so long especially his future girlfriends and will Lana Lille and Mallow be in this story if so can you add them to the hearm to I haven't seen them in a hearm with ash before along with may dawn misty and serena before keep up the good work this fanfc looks great so far keep up the momentum u have right now

A worn out concept, but I still very much enjoy such tales. Good start, some issues with awkward interactions between characters and their thoughts, but not deal breaking by any means. I will say I enjoyed the fact that you wrote it so Ash didn't keep his fake persona through some arbitrary amount of time in the tournament (nice touch). Nice job, excited to see where you take this. All the best!

Interesting story so far. I'm looking forward to when Ash will return and see how his friends have changed. Still good job and update soon.

Glad to see this fanfic is fixed the first time I read this it was filled with lots of words numbers and other stuff as for the hearm I just want to be sure are misty may dawn and Serena in the hearm I just want to be 100 percent sure and how many more girls will be in the hearm

This was interesting keep up the good work hope fore more soon

Oh Lord...
Another "x years later tournament and aura overpowered" cliché fic.
Can't anyone be original anymore?