Good seven chapters

This is really good so far, can't wait for the next chapter.

Another chapter, another unanswered question. To be honest I've only referenced Simon a few times before in fanfics, although I do love some Klathena. I'm curious though, in all the chapters so far, Athena mentioned an allergy to an ingredient but never told what ingredient she was allergic to and I totally agree, Klavier makes a great caretaker, he's one of those guys who is just so loveable. Maybe keep that in mind in the future.

I really prefer Athena with Apollo, but this is cute. :)

Heh, looks like everyone's getting sick. :p Nice job.

Another mystery in this chapter, what was wrong with Simon. But if that is the case, who will prosecute in his place if he is ill. I guess we will find out later on.

In that sentence about the prosecutor Apollo and Phoenix were about to face, was it really necessary to use "them"? That doesn't sound right to me grammatically since there was no real reason to keep the person's gender a secret. Other than that, good job.

5 hours is a long wait to wake up but I guess it's reasonable for any ailment, even if it's the measles, it seems we have a new cliffhanger to figure out after this chapter. I guess we have to learn to expect cliffhangers.

Good work. :)

Even if it *did* cause autism, still better to vaccinate than exposing everyone else, like kids and the elderly and those possibly immuno compromised, to the disease!

Poor Athena. I hope she stays smart and decides to get the treatment she needs before possibly getting others sick. That sucks about her allergy to the vaccine. Hopefully she can get that sorted out.

Good job writing, I didn't see much, if any, mistakes and you've certainly seem to have done your research. Keep it up.

I'm glad you took the time to write this. What you said about the warning well both groups do get ear infections, but that is not the point.

Overall I think it was a very good first chapter.

Nice job. :) I look forward to more.