Thanks for writing this! I really enjoyed it! I imagined an ending where Ash dies after just dismantling the company (coz ash always seems to die) Pika-Raichu uses so much of his electricity on Ash to try and save him that somehow he turns back into a Pikachu and the Banette in Ash dies rather than the human bit so he's back to normal and then Team Rocket is no more and happy ever after. Ash dedicates his entire life to trying to find a way to bring Misty and Brock back and when he finally does, they trn back into their young selves and Ash is about twenty years oldr than them but he is still technically young because he can only die when pikachu dies and then when they are old and happy, they both die wam in their bed dreaming about being with each other and their friends.

I think this was a good point to end the story but you just made it too abrupt. As the other reviewer said there are so many ways this story can continue but with it comes big potential for it to start dragging and probably end up abandoned. But you could have at least expanded more on the fates of more of the characters, what happens to Team Rocket and to the Merger project. Would have been nice to see Ash and co. meeting Sabrina, pretty weird that the two primary storylines here hardly cross, especially since Sabrina and Ash shared a goal of taking down Giovanni.

Anyway it was a good read, cool concept and you pulled it off alright. Openish ending lets me finish it in my head at least.

The end? THE END!? What the hell man! There's so much more that could have been done, and you just end it just like that!? I feels like you given meat barely half a steak Burger! All you did give a second grade story it feels like you're so much more that you're not elaborating on!

Sequel pls xaxaxa

The whole story was clever and the open ending is okay with me.

Wow... Great chapter~

Very nice!

Sucker Punch isn't fighting. It's Dark.

A very intense and great battle.

That was an awesome battle! I wonder if Perish Song affected the grunts and Misty, too. I'm glad Ash won, but I wonder what this will mean for Fiora...Giovanni isn't one for mercy...

Now this is a brutal battle, but also very intense

Uh o.o Battle evolutions mean trouble! If Ash wins I wonder what will happen to Fiora.

Ashino Ash Audino

So Ash is Ghost-type and Fi is Dark-type... why do I get a feeling this won't end well going by type matchups.

Also, this fanfic has a TVTropes page! :D tvtropes pmwiki/pmwiki. php/Fanfic/Mergers

The second half of the chapter was haunting, but very cool