Not bad at all, but I always pictured Lincoln and Ronnie Anne’s son be named “Leonardo”; Leon or Leo for short.

Why not write chapter 2

Rly need more chaps

Aunt Maggie unlcle rocky and Bobbi is their uncle twice

that was adorable! XD

Amusing to say the least.

I like how you showed the sisters in some character.

Though, you tell way too much mate! I found myself losing interest really quickly.

Good job mate, I rate 6.5/10.