| Reviews for Lillie and Nebby |
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   XiaolinMamodo chapter 6 . 7/12/2018 I like it so far, but there are some slapstick staples missing. I think having Lillie do the "running on the spot" thing sometimes would be a good idea, bonus points if you can get Officer Jenny in on the slapstick too. Also a common thing on Tom and Jerry was Tom getting caught by the tail, but since Lillie doesn't have a tail perhaps she could get caught by the skirt instead. Anyway, keep up the good work! |
| Nuki chapter 6 . 5/3/2017 Do you think maybe you could make a fic of harry being sent to the redwall universe? So far the only one i can think of adopting him is romsca from pearls of lutra but still it would be cool i mean imagine having a pirate for a mum. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/19/2017 Are you going to make a Harry potter and danganronpa story soon because i want to see a story about kumarue and harry together please make a story about that please |
| Kalmarin chapter 6 . 4/19/2017 Nebby finally got what was coming to him XD |
| ultima-owner chapter 6 . 4/19/2017 her loopiness was so good |
| Groundon65 chapter 5 . 4/17/2017 How about Lillie getting inflated with helium |
| El Presidente chapter 5 . 4/17/2017 How's about the next one includes Lillie falling off a cliff a la Wile E Coyote (complete with sign and neck stretch)? |
| Dragonsrule18 chapter 6 . 4/8/2017 Let me know if you need any more help! I might be able to come up with a few scenarios. |
| Red the Pokemon Master chapter 6 . 4/8/2017 Good luck with this story and PLEEEAASE WRITE FOTR THE OTHER STORIES YOU HAVE! |
| THE CREATOR and Hydra chapter 1 . 4/8/2017 NEBBY, GET IN THE FUCKING BAG, I SWEAR TO GOD XD |
| ultima-owner chapter 5 . 4/4/2017 Ghost type are such pranksters |
| ShulkXMelia23 chapter 5 . 4/2/2017 I have always enjoyed your writing and like this story to very funny and light hearted I just hope you continue some of your older story to I really hope you updated your Harry potter overwach crossover soon but regardless good luck |
| Dragonsrule18 chapter 5 . 4/1/2017 LOL, love it! |
| XANAVirus chapter 4 . 4/1/2017 This is hilarious, I very much enjoyed and laughed at this part of the story. Total thumbs up from me! The contrived nature of the caveman was great! Very nicely done, you had me chuckling when it showed up. Keep it up! I'm having a lot of fun. :) |
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/31/2017 are you going to make a harry potter and danrounpa soon in the beginning harry in towa city about to be killed by a monakma but it was destroyed by koumaru with her hacking gun she saw harry alone and sacred and knew how he felt so she decides to take him to the hotel by the bridge were toko is justy an idea at the beginning here jus please make a story like this please |
