Reviews for A Maelstrom's Curse- Dance with the Dead
Guest chapter 1 . 3/31/2018
you write this in your profile.. "We at the EAN will NEVER leave a story unfinished, bla bla bla", is that real? or empty promises? how many years are you going to finish this fic? hah! look at you, one chapter up then 'poof', gone.. all fanfic authors are the same.. all talk..
Guest chapter 1 . 3/31/2018
Eien no Kamui?! gosh how stupid are you at naming things?! eieneternal.. meaning, the portal will always open for eternity.. use Kaguya's jutsu 'amenominaka' if you desperate for a very powerful space/time jutsu..
Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2017
uipdate cks
Bobthehuggod chapter 1 . 7/19/2017
I like this I hope EN continues this
shapeshifter340 chapter 1 . 6/29/2017
Please continue this great story as soon as possible
Angron chapter 1 . 5/24/2017
very goog first chapter
naruto chapter 1 . 5/1/2017
great chapter keep it up
Skilgannon the Damned chapter 1 . 4/16/2017
A good first chapter, and well written overall.
HadoFoxGodAsashi chapter 1 . 4/7/2017
Yeah piss off you dirty ass Kishimoto lover.
Wacko12 chapter 1 . 4/3/2017
so no Bijuu?
Guest chapter 1 . 3/31/2017
Dude good chapter...I feel the are some areas u can improve on but I believe the you will improve the more you keep on writing keep it up
Perseus12 chapter 1 . 4/2/2017
Cool chapter and I like it! Please continue update new chapter, 'cause the excitement thrills me!
The Superior Straight-Edge chapter 1 . 4/1/2017
Interesting start. I can't wait to see how this progresses.
javi30 chapter 1 . 3/31/2017
very interesting.
keep writing.
bladetri chapter 1 . 3/28/2017
like XD
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