Yo, now to complain, but there’s a lot of spelling errors, and also the card type is not cybverse, it’s cyberse. Also, I think u should ass five headed link dragon into this story because it’s name has link dragon in it. That way there will be 3 different link dragon mons.

Some of us don't mind long chapters

Great duel and chapter dude. Hope that Playmaker can get back from defeat and beat Roger and Chihiro. By the way up in checking out my story and review it if you like it?
May the force be with you

you could do a second season or third season since apparently yugioh vrains will end very quickly

when the arc ends based on the first season please make a new season based on the second season and I want to see yua having a duel with soulburner or bohman

It is impressive how the second season is developing and soon I will finish and imitate the playmaker by listing the three things I want for the third season.
1-a monster duel tournament that takes place in link vrains (old, new and mirror) that has the classic is to reach the final you must collect a certain number of Tournament wager items and there is a rule special for these duels.
2-that both miyu and Windy's partner appear and together with the other children of the hanoi project and the ignis are the main protagonists in this way we will have a team that looks like a combination of the 5ds team with the children chosen from digimon.
3-that the enemy to defeat or enemies have an appearance and use letters with thematic of computer viruses and even the main antagonist should be called Y2K

Ok, so I read the first seven chapters and... um... The dialogue at the first 2-3 chapters was pretty cringy to me, I can't explain why. It wasn't bad, but I feel that Yuya was overreacting at some points.

The OC cards section seems pretty badly structured to me. PSCT aside, most of the time I just get more confused when looking at it than understanding the effects of the cards presented.

Sorry, still no grandiose reaction. Playmaker lost? Meh, I did it first. Ai got taken? Meh, no more jokes. Chihiro feels bad? Good. You work with the bad guys. Feel bad. You get a middle finger from me. Don't care if you wanna go home. Let me bring Fullcross in. Not to Duel him just to Palpatine lightning hands him. Violently. Painfully. Roget too. BTW this blatant hatred doesn't stem from the fact that they won, it's from Chihiro's broken Deck and 'want to be above it all' attitude. Elliot didn't get broken Deck privileges, in fact looking back it sucked! And he killed people, technically.
So...halfway through thing...what was it? Have I mentioned it? Did I miss it? I can't tell what is 'halfway' here.
...I should not have wrote this at 10 o clock at night.

you have heard about the latest in yugioh vrains the main antagonist is light ignis and this case is very similar to the previous season with revolver, and I will use a quote that batman said in the video game injustice 2 each villain is the hero in his own story

I'm gonna admit I'm not the best at reviews, but since you asked, I couldn't very well say no.
I was completely lost for the most part during this entire Duel. Your style is much more longer, elaborate and technical then the anime and other stories, mine included, so its difficult for me to keep track of everything, including yes, sometimes, which characters POV I'm in, even though you do state it. Still, it's absolutely not a bad thing, and in my opinion, gives you a certain cut above others...its just a very particular cut.
Whilst it was difficult for me to follow, I did understand the important parts, particularly character interactions. I notice you're always keen to push the anime characters as much as possible to give them more dimensions, which is very nice.
Ah, nice to see I got 'blamed' for the mixing, was wondering if that was my fault. No problem though, you seem to be using it just fine...just...don't go too crazy, 5000 ATKers and Link 8's should be your limit.
As for the previews, C20 did stand out to me, wondering how that's going to go down. As for the others, as they say, I'll read them when I get to them.
Sorry if this was a bit minimalistic. Like I said, I'm not one for reviews much nowadays, but you do deserve it. Keep up the effort and good work!

Did I just see a Persona 5 reference?

You could pendulum summon, it would just take two spell card slots

Ehm, Jesus have nothing in common with Anime or Fanfiction you know?

yu gi oh vrains already in the second season tell me you plan to do a re-writing of the final battle against the hanoi knights with yuya and mayoi participating in the battle of the hanoi tower.
I'm glad you liked my idea for a skill so I have some ideas for some original skills for yuto, yoke and yuri.
countdown xyz: if a monster xyz has 20 overlay units or more the duel is automatically won, you can equip the monster xyz with a card as an overlay unit but you pay 100 life points to do this.
lightspeed synchro: regardless of who's turn a synchronized invocation can be made using material either in the field, hand, cemetery or removed, even during the battle phase.
cycle of life and death fusion: all monsters must have one or more fusion to activate this skill they become equipped monsters of union between them even in the area of monsters earn points equal to the sum of all of them

Interesting conclusion. I'm curious to know what exactly what Unknown was testing in this duel. Yuya's resolve perhaps?

There were some spelling and Grammar issues that made reading some segments a little difficult. As I did with OPfan, I offer you my proofreading services as well. Don't even worry about me not being caught up with a story or spoilers, I don't mind either.

Still, a good chapter, and I will be interested to see what next is in store for Yuya.