| Reviews for Keep Moving Forward |
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Artdirector123 chapter 2 . 9/9/2017 This fic is amazing. My friend reccomended it to me and I'm so glad she did. I loved Ed's realisation that he'll have to get a normal job XD. I'll defientely be readng the rest of this tory here soon. Thanks for writing it! |
Basil Allegri chapter 5 . 8/26/2017 I like that you're writing about the day-to-day details of recovery, the small stories- like how Al decided to cut his hair, getting a new wardrobe, etc. |
ParrishGranger chapter 1 . 6/29/2017 this is so heartwarming, but seriously, stupid Mason. hopefully Mei and Al get to talk to each other |
manga.geek.3 chapter 5 . 6/7/2017 Man, I love this. Your story is amazing and always gets me laughing, or, feeling anxiety. Hopefully thay're told about mei's phonecall! gah! xD |
GrumpyCat503 chapter 3 . 4/16/2017 Ha! Love Ed's reaction! |
Fir3danc3r chapter 3 . 4/6/2017 *dies* great chapters : next chapter will also be wonderful! Can't wait! |
manga.geek.3 chapter 3 . 4/4/2017 Aw, this was such an adorable chapter! I love the interaction between Winry and Edward. haha so fantastic! Can't wait to hear about Ling and Mae and Lan Fan :D And of course... the continuous knowledge of Edward and Alphonse! xD |
Purplepanther7 chapter 2 . 4/1/2017 This is great so far! The one thing that I didn't like about the ending of brootherhood was that Al didn't get to eat his apple pie! I love how you continued it directly after the series ended. Your characterization feels spot on, and I anticipate reading more! |
manga.geek.3 chapter 2 . 3/29/2017 Awwwww loved this chapter! You're quite good at writing the Elric brothers. Not only that, you've got some amazing pacing going on and I feel like their reactions would be realistic to them. Good job! keep up the good work! Can't wait for more! |
manga.geek.3 chapter 1 . 3/29/2017 awwww I love this! I don't know if you're going to continue the story, but if you are... I will so read it! xD |
Artdirector123 chapter 1 . 3/29/2017 Love this story so far! The interactions between Edward and Alphonse were adorable, and there were several funny moments I loved, like the argument that arose over milk or Edward nuudging Alphonse and such. |
PointlessKnife chapter 1 . 3/27/2017 Aww, this was really enjoyable to read! I loved it! :) |