Great sequel so far! I look forward to the next chapter!

I had a heart attack at the start of this chapter. I know I shouldn't fall for it but damn, I'm just too invested. Also, to the A/N: Yes, please.

This chapter has been like a rollercoaster. First I was like,"Oh, YAY, she and L finally married." Then,"Wait a second, brown eyes? WAIT SHE MARRIED LIGHT? SOUND THE SIRENS!" I was so relieved when I read "And she falls off the bedFALSE ALARM! FALSE ALARM!) Then, "Wait, she dreamt of it again? Is it a bad omen?" Then the gang (Nao, L, Light and Misa) meet up and I was like, "Phew, it's fine. Things are casual, no need to get paranoid." Then I was like, "Wait is this a foreshadowing?"

I love the interactions between the 3 musketeers and Nao. Never a dull moment.

I normally dont review, but I felt like I just had to comment on your obvious improvement over the span of this series. You've really have gotten better at conveying a serious, and more passive tone that resonates with the main character. At first Enfer was just good, rather basic with an interesting concept, but still better than most fanfics. As the story has progressed I can see every aspect of your writing improve, turning this story into an absolutely enthralling read that makes me excited for more. I'd definitely rate you as one of the most talented writers on this site now.

The younger geniuses appeared! I’m glad that in this universe they get to do at least one case alongside L. And Nao wrangling geniuses is always fun to see :)
Thank you for continuing this story!

Yay! I've always loved your story (and the prequel of course!) and I can't wait to read more! Nao is so calm and collected that I would be so jealous if she was real. I also love their little wars and how they fit together despite their separation from reality at times. Thank you for the update!

I find it hilarious how Nao reacts to realising she is in love with L, can't wait dor more :3
Thank you so much for your work!

Are Light and Nao's parents aware of her strange relationship with L?
Btw, forgot to say it before, but her bromance with Mello gives me life ;)

I'm very surprised by Nao's dream... She never liked Light all that much, she found him pretty but that's it, so why did she dream about marrying him?! I just don't understand...
And how long has it been since the end of Enfer?
I'm very excited about this work, so good luck with your writing! Can't wait to see where you go with this story :3

ANOTHER CHAPTER WOO! Also lights analysis of Nao’s dreams are actually rather enlightening, because the normal passive life she had planned for is now unattainable as long as she is with L, but at the same time she loves him, so that complicates things I guess. Glad to see the gang back together again, and I can’t wait to see what mysteries unfold for this sequel 3.

I don't know why but I am kinda sad that Nao is not 100% happy with L. Also kinda sad about light's life too, it could have been so much more... Just MORE then it is now.
Anyway great Chapter.

Was very happy to wake up to this!

Sometimes, I find myself coming back to this story once in a while, and I fall in love with it again. I don’t read a lot of death note stories and I struggle to find stories That keep the personalities of the characters the same, but this is a nice change. All of Nao’s actions have been logical, and her new job to me is rare twist, cause who would’ve thought watari wiuld be replaced? I feel like they are almost like Sherlock and Watson, but if Watson was on the same level. like a dynamic duo. Can’t wait to see her new adventures. (I feel like it has something to do with beyond birthday, I don’t know why, probably not lol)

What the fuck. How. When. What. Where. Why.

Why do all these plot twists exist?

Thank you for the sequel, you amazing piece of shit.

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