OMG, this story so good... Please please do chapter 3 ...

So loving the story hope you put up the next chapter soon I've got to know what happens next why is it the best story's are never long enough an always leave you wanting more lol looking forward to reading your other story's keep up the amazing writing

really wish you would update want to read more of this story

Hey! Sorry it took me so long to review! Life loves twists and turns, doesn't it? Anyway, I read this when you first posted it, and now here I am! Anyway, I just wanted to say welcome back! Silver told me your computer blew up (which I've done myself!), and I didn't think you were going to finish! I'm glad you came back! Anyway, I love little Cammy! He's so cute, and Nosedive acting like the big brother is different and cool! I like it! Secondly, what happens to the group? I'm dying to find out here! Does WW get hurt or Duke or someone? How will they be able to help the duck if Cammy's in the Infirmary? Also...*snaps fingers* I had another question! I need to take my vitamins! Anyway, I'll just review again when I remember! Well, great job and I can't wait for more! Don't keep us waiting!
Dev
P.S. I remember! You had Nosedive actually accept his position and role in the chapter when it came down to either Tanya or he, and I really thought that was good. Showed maturity, and I liked how WW phrased it! Good job!

Well it sure has been a long time Ice, and well worth the wait. I understand your feeling about a fic taking on a mind of it's own. You get one idea and it just develops itself. *shurgs* Must come from a higher power.
I don't see much wrong with the story, but then again, I wasn't looking. I was too busy enjoying your manuscript. I love the way you describe things, though I did notice that you had quite a bit of dialouge in this one compared to your other stories. I also never imagined Dive would blush so much. I like the idea about Buzz though, and you have me in suspense with what will happen to the gang.
I'm glad your computer got back up and running. Last time I spoke to you it blew up. Speaking of blowing up, have you noticed how Tanya blows tons of things up, but never computers? Sorry, I just had that little brain storm. Now I have to go clean up the computer lab. It's a total mess now.
Smile, Live, Laugh, Love and God Bless
Elfy

I love it! The Mallory/Camden meeting scene was so way beyond cute. Keep writing I can't wait for the next chapter.
Love and God Bless,
Daniella

Yay, it's the sequel . . . I forget if I reviewed the other one but it was pretty good, and this one's off to a great start!

YEAY! The Sequel! Can't wait fo rmore!

Now this is good. Thanks for the great read Ice. I feel sorry for Cammy. I don't like to see him cry, but I like to see Dive squirm. I can't wait till chapter 2. Will there be any cinnamon toast? I like cinnomon toast. m. cinnamon toast. *drool* m.