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SkyBell1272 chapter 5 . 6/12/2019 Loved this story |
CloveLudwig99 chapter 5 . 8/20/2017 I would love to See a Story about the kids as teens! |
CloveLudwig99 chapter 4 . 8/19/2017 Brilliant! |
CloveLudwig99 chapter 3 . 8/19/2017 Great Chapter! |
CloveLudwig99 chapter 2 . 8/19/2017 I was Hoping for a girl! |
CloveLudwig99 chapter 1 . 8/19/2017 Loved it! |
Blackrosetriad.kitty456 chapter 5 . 7/7/2017 Yes! Please write a story like that! I have always wanted to read a future generation story! |
smartmeh007 chapter 5 . 6/29/2017 Thank you thank you! It is so hard looking for jem and tessa stories. Keep it up :) Stories about their children too pls prettty pls |
TheRecaller'sCollection chapter 5 . 6/29/2017 Hello! Beautiful chapter! You've once again opened very nicely, which leaves a lot of room for a plot, you could definitely do a whole story of the children training to be shadowhunters etc. Which would be nice, it depends on you how in depth you want to go, you could just do a chapter for every life event or special moments such as their first words etc. But I really like how you have considered tessa's emotions and jem's creating a clear balance between past and present, the concept and meaning of immortality. I can see already how tessa's controversy of revealing the past to them could be a really good storyline as she reflects her conflict and how the children react, it could actually end up being a strain in some of the relationships in the family while they're in their teen years which would be very interesting to write about. Perhaps one of the children refuse to understand and become distant to one or both parents, perhaps jem has to have a deep discussion of how everything came to be and his support for tessa. Maybe the children's reaction it'll could even become a strain on jem and tessa's marriage that they must work through - the possibilities are endless and I can already see how well you write in a domestic setting I think it would be very interesting to both read and write! Obviously I'm still here if you need any help xx |
alex-hp7 chapter 5 . 6/29/2017 I loved it! I'm heartbroken but I love it! Mentions of Will and Wessa children... *sobs* The idea of Jessa children interacting with others is amazing! You should definitely write that! :) |
Addy42 chapter 4 . 5/31/2017 This story was everything I ever wanted in Jessa fanfic thank you so much, that you wrote it. I hope there will be another chapter soon. |
Guest chapter 4 . 5/12/2017 For the next chapter, can you write about Jace telling Jocelyn? Please? It'd be hilarious! |
Rose Londelis chapter 4 . 5/10/2017 Oh gosh this chapter was beautiful and funny and this whole fic is amazing! I'm so excited to see more of this. Maybe you could do something with Ellie's firsts or something? Great job with this story! I'm definitely gonna read your new fic too! |
alex-hp7 chapter 1 . 5/5/2017 Glad I'm home alone so I could laugh at the clueless Jem aloud. He's so adorable! (And finally a fanfic where Tessa can cook!) |
puripri chapter 3 . 5/1/2017 Beauty Chapter, |