It was nice to read something other than Thor and warriors three travelling with Loki. And I like how Loki and Tyr continue to understand each other better throughout the journey. And young Loki too, that's too cute to not squeal, haha. Thank you for writing this!

I just wanted to let you know that I absolutely loved your story. Honestly it was so good I couldn't stop reading. Thank you for sharing this masterpiece with us

Great story. I enjoyed the interaction between Loki and Tyr. I read it all in one night after working a 12 hour shift-which is pretty amazing. I can't wait to read more of your stories.

I can't believe we've reached the end of this tale! Although both Tyr and Loki do clash like oil and water, it is good to see that the outcome of this venture has made them a smidgeon closer. It would have been interesting to see Tyr taking in some of Loki's knowledge and applying it to King Freyr's court as he observes the different types of elves surrounding him, or if Loki would have shown the Asgardian warrior spirit of relishing his time spent wallowing in dirt and battle to much of his elven friends' dismays. Overall a light-hearted, happy ending for Loki and Tyr!

I truly loved this story so much. I hardly believe this is the end. I wish for more Tyr/Loki moments:DDD Are you going to write sequel? I am curious how will Tyr s relationship with Loki develop and how awkward they will be around each other:))) And whether their relationship will turn to something else... I liked how you pointed that Loki looked happier with elves (than with Asgardians) and he truly enjoyed their company. And Tyr noticed it. I am so happy you wrote this story and I am looking forward to more of your stories.

Wow... I loved this story!
You could make a fic showing if Tyr really started the training of Loki... I hope you do more stories like this.
Congratulations, your writing is awesome!

Loki and Tyr actually bonded! Who knew that could have ever happened?!
(I like the fact that Tyr was able to see how open and fun he can be among people he's friends with.)

Fantastic story!

SO GOOD OMG.

This chapter I like it... ANOTHER!

I am loving your story and you definitely deserve plenty of positive reviews for it. This last chapter was enthralling with so much action, unveiling of secrets and past histories, and having more questions arise in regards to Tyr's past. My favorite part throughout this chapter is when Tyr started yelling for Loki's help. It may be thought of that this proud general is finally acknowledging his weakness and requesting for help (which can be seen as cowardice in Aesir warrior culture, maybe?), however I took it in a more positive way. While it may be a desperate attempt to live, he was having faith that Loki still trusted that he was a good enough Aesir to save despite his treacherous, bloodthirsty history, and vice versa that Loki trusts Tyr to be a changed Aesir who learned from his past to become the great General he has come to respect during his lifetime. I don't know if this makes any sense, but either way, wonderful chapter and I look forward to reading the next one :) !

Omg this was very action chapter! I loved it and enjoyed every sentence. I enjoy all their adventure. I am so glad they managed to escape Elgoths men and kill them all. But the worst part is yet before Tyr... he has to explain to Loki what Elgoth said about him and his previous life. It will not be easy to explain and for Loki to understand and believe. Also I wonder about their changed feeling towards each other:))) Because such intense adventure is not easy. Please update soon.

Wow...

Wow... all that and Loki's first teleport. Thanks for sharing!

*applause*
another good and amazing chapter.
Can't wait for the next one!

Wow I am so excited by this chapter. I enjoyed every part of their quarrels. I love their interactions and the way they mock each other. It was hilarious how Tyr mocked Lokis abilities and then Loki shoved him he can catch fish too:))) And that waterfall scene is awesome. Sneaky Tyr:)) I wonder when Tyr will finally realize his deeper motivations and feelings towards Loki. But they are so difficult with each other:DDD And I hate Elgoth so much. But you wrote his character so well. I am so curious about next chapter. Please update soon.