Reviews for A Slightly Altered Tale
NeverTooMuchInspiration chapter 6 . 8/6
Fantastic! Thank you for writing and posting!
Purplepulu chapter 6 . 10/10/2018
A beautiful ending to such a wonderful story! I love it! I love Sanji’s character and though a little OC (but understandable due to his past), I freaking loved it!
Caro chapter 6 . 2/23/2018
Hermoso,fue hermoso y me encanto hsta derrame lagrimas al final :3
Miyu Hinamori chapter 6 . 12/18/2017
You made me cry.
One of the best AU I've ever read.
Miyu Hinamori chapter 3 . 12/18/2017
Planning on reading everything in this fic but I wanted to get in one comment.
What a well-written fic.
I'm still afraid of the repercussions of what Sanji did in Water 7 but this fic is so well-developed and realistic. Seeing Sanji go through this traumatic time line really gives a different perspective and it's just so goooood! Poor damaged Sanji with emotions sharp as a knife and yet so fragile in friendship
Stelra Etnae chapter 6 . 12/16/2017
I can't even begin to describe how much I love this fic. Every little detail you made in the storyline, whether it was keeping to the original plot or changing it in particular ways, added to the emotional impact of this AU. And that last scene, mirroring what Sora did for Sanji years back, was a perfect ending to this whole thing.

A wonderful read, thanks for writing!
Guest chapter 6 . 10/29/2017
Great!
ruby890 chapter 2 . 10/19/2017
Wow this is great!
The Fall of Spring chapter 6 . 10/19/2017
I don’t think this counts as slow updating though? You’ve written so much, plenty of fanfictions take years for this much content...
Guest chapter 6 . 9/17/2017
Oh, the feels. Sanji had it rough.
IcyPanther chapter 6 . 7/19/2017
I think it wrapped up very nicely! Thank you so much for sharing this with us!
And although Reiju didn't help him out when they were kids, I'm glad she realized at the end. And I'm glad Luffy stopped Sanji from killing the Judge. I wanted him to die, but it shouldn't be by Sanji's hand. I'm hoping Big Mom kills him or something :D
Thanks again for the lovely fic!
John Spangler chapter 1 . 7/18/2017
Hello, I just wanted to say how much I've enjoyed this story. It's a perfect example of a well done AU, with different events but characters that actually stay In Character, and also one of the few cases I've found until now of a Sanji-centered fic that's not yaoi. So, thanks for writing it.
vegesan chapter 1 . 7/17/2017
perfection. omg . just PERFECTION
shaya10 chapter 6 . 7/16/2017
Last chapter! So glad it is out ! Very happy it is finished and how it finished (as cheesy and fluffy as it is ;)) it was just great!

Loved the first scene with how Zoro and Luffy discussed the Sanji issue and how Luffy managed to get Zoro to follow his 'plan' :) I loved the ending when Zoro just give him the tracker with just a 'alright let's go' xd

I enjoyed the dark part when Sanji was in prison and panicking and still trying to find a solution! It was well attitré and ne not too dark in the end so no worries there ;) the flashbacks and panic attacks were well described and I loved how you put every time the 'so tired' I was like 'not good not good!' Wondering if he would be in any shape to really fight because he was apparently not eating (I wondered twice if he was eating at least!), not sleeping and in a constant state of fear... not to mention he started hallucinating

I was really glad when reiju showed up and decided to finally do what she should have done 13 years ago ! Their conversation about why she was helping now hit me hard when she said 'what if' ad I was like 'well your brother would have been so much better if you had the same courage as the canon!Reiju!' I understand that Sanji didn't want to hear any of her bullshit at that moment

I loved how you describe the moments before the confrontation with his father, the wating was... suffocating, even more when he started to doubt everything and be paranoid ! And I was so sure Ichiji was going to... do something! Anything ! That would be horrible and stuff! And then Luffy showed up and sent him flying! :D I was so happy about that! Serves the bastard right! Also loved Usopp's intervention to back them up from afar ;) nice touch! Especially considering the friendship between Sanji and Usopp ;)

Too bad the fighting was so short! I would have loved to see Zoro vs Ichiji or Usopp sending an explosive star straight to Niji's face! :D or Nami actually sending an electrik shock at them!

Omg when Sanji went for the killing blow was... wow! And then I was like 'nooooo Luffy don't! You idiot its poisonous!' But good thing he stopped Sanji from having more blood of his hands ! And just earlier when Sanji took is knives from the locker, I was 'i hope he doesn't end up hurting Luffy with it!' -_-

I loved when Luffy challenged Judge in a duel for Sanji and asking Sanji what he wanted ! I thought Luffy should have said something like this in the manga : Sanji is always 'I have to, I have to, I have to' for everybody 's sake, never 'I want to' so I thought it was great here when Luffy said it :) and the final words :D manga power !

I just love how Sanji needed everyone to be around him and safe to relax completely and how he casually mentioned the knife was poisonous xd I thought they were going to be some angst at that moment but you did it one piece style and it was hilarious ! I loved Law's comments about how he couldn't cut Luffy in pieces because he might lose some of his body parts there hahhahahaha lol it was great!

And the final scenes with the fluff and nakamaship was just so adorable ! It was really cute the Usopp trying to stop Sanji from smoking and the Nami is super posses so now Mr is in debt hahhaha

But the best is of course Luffy! When he showed up with the soup, I really couldn't stop myself and I was all 'awwww Luffyyyyy that's so sweet!' And all I could think about for a minute there was 'adorable ! Cute! Awww! Such a dork! Luffffyyyyy! Awwww! So sweet ! Sweetheart ! ' you get the idea xd which turn into horror when I saw it was a 'purple miasma' I was like 'who let him cook?' But then Sanji kicked Usopp (hard) to stop him from saying anything and I was like 'noooo! He is gonna eat it!?' Which was followed very fast by another fit of 'awww' moment xd

Seriously it was hilarious when Sanji saw the still alive fish (I thought he was exagereting it at first but no Luffy really did it ! Xd and the cola... and the tangerine xd yeah that scene was my favourite for the chapter!

Really enjoyed this story! For any addition to it... a special chapter with Canon!Sanji and Assassin!Sanji meeting would be so cool ;)

Thanks for this amazing story and hope to see you soon with new ones!

Ps : loved the Zoro called Sanji by his name after this and the drinking together and the making fun of Law with its consequences hahahahah
Wordlet chapter 6 . 7/16/2017
*applauds* I loved it, I loved it /all/ it was so great and I loved it. *claps harder*
I gotta say that the part where Luffy grabbed the poison knife makes me sooooo happy. Partially because Luffy got poisoned and nobody cared for a while and partly because he did it so that Sanji wouldn't kill Judge because he didn't actually want to. Or at least that's the vibe I got. It was some mix of wanting Sanji to do what Sanji wanted instead of what he thought he needed and also of not believing in killing people like that and thinking that Sanji wasn't actually sure what he was doing.
I also adored the scene where Sanji ate the stew, and Usopp, but Sanji. That's so sweet and incredible and of course he would. If that stew had literally bubbled and spoke to him I think he would have eaten it to appease his happy captain. Because he gets how important that feeling is, to see someone eat your food. Even if it didn't mean the same thing to Luffy as it did to Sanji.
Third love is actually the first scene, with Zoro and Luffy. Luffy has the first priority of Sanji and Zoro tries to talk him out of it... but the whole time has the tracking device ready because he knows they're gonna go after him no matter what happens.
Okay okay, last thing, when Zoro used Sanji's name? That must have been an incredible moment for everyone. Seriously. Crazy, I can't even imagine Zoro saying it, I get why you didn't write the scene, it would be weird keeping peope in character when that's so... out of character and yet oddly fitting in this scenario. Not oddly. It totally fits and it's perfect.
Love this fic, love how you wrote it, never stop. Thanks so much!
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