Reviews for Outside Humanity
WildlyLaughing chapter 16 . 5/10
Fan-made ending to your fanfiction:

Faith tries to string Lilah along so that she can save Dawn and Xander. She's immensely shocked at Xander being 6, but manages to keep her cool until they're free. Xander sees something in her through his aura-reading and likes her. The LA gang fight off W&H's attempts to kill Angel and kidnap Xander again.

In the end, it turns out that Xander was not de-aged. He was switched with his 6-year-old self from the past, which is why Tara feels nothing wrong with him. Xander is physically the age he's supposed to be, he's just chronologically displaced.

With Xander now being more open (as he's a kid and hasn't got the chance to build up his walls yet), he's able to use his abilities and insights to help the Scooby Gang kick ass from the sidelines. All while everyone slowly realizes that there was something horrific in the way that Xander grew up originally and that there might be something more to the Zeppo than they thought.

What does everyone think? Good ending? Author, do you like it? I'm just taking guesses from everything I've read. Would love to hear from ya!
Zaraih chapter 16 . 5/2
I enjoyed this, thanks for sharing!
I look forward to reading any future updates ;)
Kitty chapter 16 . 2/13/2018
Awww..abandoned. sigh good story. Since it hasnt been updated in 8 years i guess i wont see if xander ever grows up again. A shame.
Ihatechoosinganame chapter 16 . 8/23/2016
I wish there was more, amazing story
Catkyn chapter 16 . 1/23/2016
I am not sure where life has taken you since last you updated this story (or any of your others); regardless, I certainly enjoy re-reading what there is of this story. I love the way you've written Spike, and wee!Xander is just adorable. Tara finding a bit of spine is just awesome, and watching Dawn act younger than she appears is just fun.

I'm holding out a vague hope that this plot-bunny will come back and nibble a bit more, while you also find a bit of free time with which to write. And, even if that never happens, thank you for sharing what you have of this fic.
brendafay chapter 16 . 2/22/2015
more please
yamiduke13 chapter 16 . 11/6/2014
This story is so amazing. I am really enjoying it and I hope you write more. I love little Xander haha he is just way too adorable and I love how he is bringing everyone together into a family.
dragon chapter 16 . 9/19/2014
hi notice you have not witten on this story line for a while. do you think you will again because this is a great story.
Katie chapter 16 . 4/22/2014
Oh my gosh! I am so heartbroken that this hasn't been updated yet I love it so much!
Rocky Balboa chapter 16 . 9/28/2013
Fabulous super great story. SO? Where's the next 16 chapters? I can't be the only one wanting more story. Get on the ball and write 3 years is long enough to procrastinate.
Guest chapter 16 . 6/4/2013
This is so terrific - why did you never finish it ? Please , Please finish it - even after all this time
kitsuneko1976 chapter 16 . 2/17/2013
oh dear. puppy eyes and a brassed off slayer? this bodes well...

and in the words of Mr. Twist, please, sir, some more?
kitsuneko1976 chapter 14 . 2/17/2013
those jars are indeed the devil.
kitsuneko1976 chapter 13 . 2/17/2013
heh. yeah, i can so see that reaction.

and really, who DOESN'T like legos? even in their wrong mind?
kitsuneko1976 chapter 12 . 2/17/2013
*snrrrk* okay...yeah, not quipping about the hair would define life altering indeed.

nit pickage:
But those higher beings better hope she never met Cordelia Chase face to face.- they as opposed to she?

Rick could only blink and dazedly watch as a man wearing way too many layers for eight degree weather proceeded to slam -eighty?
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