Hope you have not abandoned this story. And hope you update soon.

Update soon please.

Could you post another chapter please .

Could you post another chapter please.

I was happy to see that this story was updated. I don't know how many chapters are included in this update since the last chapter I reviewed was #11. I'm not sure what to think about it though. It looks like since Buffy one again couldn't do what she should have, which was to kill the older Willow before the part controlled by Twilight took over again, that you might have the older Dawn do it instead. I can only imagine how painful that will be for her considering what she had gone through in her life already. I hope the next update contains happier moments. But after reading this most recent update, I won't get my hopes up.

This is poorly written

Sorry if it's not you, but did you post a complete story called Liebestod? It was posted the same day you updated a bunch of your stories, but has been completely removed now! I have any info but the title anymore, hoping it was you!

Ouch... talk about taking the kid gloves off. Nasty first strike...

It would be interesting to have something written about the Human reaction, do they launch nukes or do they refrain, the panic, the flights to refuges by most of the governments around the world, and another reactive piece from the Daemon world, do they panic as well, join with the Humans or slaughter them?

Oh boy, Dark Willow.

I was pleasantly surprised to see this updated before Christmas. This is one of the top five stories I wanted to see updated soon. I like how she was using spells and lied to distract the Scoobies. Better safe than sorry, and it is something the others don’t have the guts to do. Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.

I could have sworn that Future Dawn had killed Spike along with Drucilla shortly after her arrival? Or am I mixing up two of your stories?

Also who or what is the "fid" mentioned in the second to last paragraph?

Worship Her!

It's interesting that Dawns main first thought on how to fix the future is to kill people. Admittedly they are people who hurt the ones she loves, and in Angel's case even worse. Yet, I wonder how different it is from Willow's first thought that she should fix things via magic.

Does Dawn Odin have a kill list like Arya Stark does? Should she tell Lil' Bit about the one true love, who died, perhaps hoping to change her own future? An unusual dream in which the younger Dawn appears, and later learning that she had shared the dream as well, learning some things Odin didn't want revealed.