| Reviews for The Last Gift |
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   Mistress-Cinder chapter 17 . 8/8 Probably a super strange and unusual feeling for the Draco to feel. |
| Guest chapter 43 . 7/19 Good story. The only miss is the vengeful Hermione holding Dolohov prisoner for many years, and torturing him. That’s nasty and beneath her character. Not at all believable to me. |
| popiluv06 chapter 37 . 6/15 Why do I get the feeling that either Draco or his wand is the Key? |
| popiluv06 chapter 38 . 6/15 Why do I get the feeling that either Draco or his wand is the Key? |
| Guest chapter 43 . 6/1 Oh my god the epilogue is so touching its so good. I feel so full somehow oh god. Feel like I‘m the one whos dying. |
| atrashpancake chapter 43 . 5/27 Lmaooooo at the Hamilton reference |
| Sarah Bradley1 chapter 8 . 5/20 I normally really hate reader instructions but here, they are such a wonderful way to end this chapter. I am all in on the emotion. |
| missyqueenleo chapter 43 . 4/10 I stayed up til 7:30am to read this and I will probably do it again in a few months, maybe weeks. WOW. |
| WizardMichi chapter 43 . 8/25/2019 this story was hard for me to read bc of how heavy it was, but thats not a bad thing. i think the point was to evoke emotion, and that it surely did. i will say, this last chapter was so beautifully done, but for me, the most difficult to get through. i had to keep pausing (cause i listen to these stories) the playback in order to get myself through it. thank you for such a well done tale |
| korko-lina chapter 43 . 8/24/2019 This story gave me so many feels. Your writing was so emotional and expressive. There were parts where I genuinely laughed and had to read a passage to my partner, and there were parts that wrecked me inside. Very, very well done. |
| TheLoteTree chapter 8 . 8/7/2019 I liked this chapter up until the final paragraph when a narrator suddenly steps in. Where did he/she come from? You've been writing the story in 3rd person but the narrative has always been so closely linked with the thoughts and emotions of the person's POV. The last paragraph just didn't suit the writing style of the story, in my opinion. |
| TheLoteTree chapter 11 . 8/7/2019 I like the story so far and look forward to reading what happens next but I just have one objection. Why are they calling Frackenburger 'professor'? He's not someone who teaches at a university. Why don't they call him 'doctor' (which, yes, I know they do sometimes but only sparingly) or just plain sir. |
| mychellefennell chapter 43 . 7/23/2019 Wow! I was doing great didn’t get emotional until the last chapter. A perfect ending |
| dcyr chapter 43 . 7/1/2019 I can’t believe the ending made me cry... |
| zsimmons14 chapter 43 . 5/25/2019 Amazing! Wonderful story, so well written! Something definitely in my eye towards the end... |
