Plz plz plz update

Are you going to add more to this story? I really hope you do but can’t say I am a fan of how it is left as of right now I love jay especially when he is with Erin and the thought of him not coming back is killing me. If you are going to finish the story I do hope it turns into a mix up and he really is okay that is just my opinion but please do writer more

pls pls update

Please please update
Please let Jay be ok in the long run pllleaassseee

Please update
Please please please make it that Jay is ok. Have him be missing or kidnapped just not dead ok

I love this story but it doesn't make sense how jay just goes back to the military out of nowhere and just drops everything :(. But I hope you update soon and please don't turn this into a sad story where jay dies, at least I hope he's okay

You like cliffhangers don't you
Please update soon
Please make so Jay is ok

this chapter makes no sense, the United States does not just call up ex Miltary and say you are demanded to come back into the service that violates all of their rights. Research things because that is too fake

Please update

I love it im glad erin is walking again oh and the baby 4 months old already i wonder who phoned jay update soon

Love it

Awww i hope erin wil say yes and that abby wil stay in jail for the rest if her life update soon please

Omg you cant leave us like that i hooe its not abby at the door although i know its her update soon

There's a good base to this story, but it is really poorly written. You should try and get a beta to help with the grammar and structure of the story.

I loved this chapter