Bro plsssssss continue this story its honestly amazing and i enjoyed it very much i know u probably won’t continue it but im asking anyways so plsssssssss

This one too damn my heartsorry again man. You don’t deserve to be treated so bad. Wish you nothing but the best!

Okay while I like your story, I beg to differ about your knowledge on canon Vegeta's strength. Canon Vegeta is capable of destroying entire universes with a single punch by the end of Resurrection of Frieza arc. I am not hating on u, just simply stating facts. Peace.

I love it so far and vegeta is long due some credit and love how it a crossover between 2 of my favorite animes.

Thanks for the awsome story please keep it going please

can you, please, continue?
you created an amazing story but its just too short.
sorry for insulting you, i know how hard it is to write, but your crossover is just the best!
(its even harder for me; im from poland)

Shrug off those haters

tsk classiker no oneshoting always the Same shit

Oh wow... lol that's hilarious

I understand your reaction to this. I write stuff but I have never once posted anything because I can't handle how some people be a jackass for no reason. Have a good time doing what you do though!

You are one of the best top ten writer's in my dbz and bleach book, I wish you would continue that last story thanks for writing the crossover.
Sincerely:OG2tone

The presence is far above omni king. Cosmic armour superman is way above omni king. Also grow a backbone. whats life without a few bruises?

this was a great story, I really enjoyed it and you really should continue it, everyone who has a talent gets trolled, they just have to deal with it to do what they love. I really think that you should give writing a shot again because you're great at it.

You're a coward that needs to grow some thicker skin. Someone was being mean to you? Welcome to life and the Internet as we know it. No one needs to kiss your rear because you're sensitive. I had mad respect for your story until you chickened out.

I read your fan fiction story on Vegeta. I really enjoyed it and thought you captured Vegeta spot on. Sorry that others gave you bad reviews and caused you to stop writing it. You should’ve kept writing it despite what those trolls said about your work. Well thanks for the short story.