I hope Anakin or Ahoska kills Tarkin for vengeance, Jedi Order be damned.

Love the depth you go into with the building of the rebellion, how you included drayson, the massacre by tarkin, and good attention to detail. The points you made on the clones are valid, but they still spent a month or two at the Jedi temple and were playing games with the younglings. Plus, in the Umbaran Arch we see that only Dogma was still blindly following orders. Yes that was different due to how Krell tricked them into freindly fire, the fact that he wasn't the chancellor, etc. But I think it was more than representative of just how few clones would blindly follow orders that were wrong if given a choice. It's better if most of the 501st and 212th are just waiting to defect or already defected and haven't meet up with the Jedi yet. Given that and how the clones will be completely replaced by conscripts or new clone templates in just a few years, the Rebellion will be gaining a lot of new soilders if they can raid Kamino and find a cure to the accelerated ageing. The Kaminoians might even just give it to the rebels of you decided to include the revolt from the original battlefront 2. On a final note you should also remember to have there be a lot of Jedi survivors for Obi wan and Ahsoka to pick up since the council would have warned all the Jedi generals about order 66 and those generals would have started to de-chip some of their clone troops.

Concerning the crew size. That's a fair reason. Though since it is a capital ship class you could also say that it is capable of carrying 14,000 soldiers for short periods as a nod to the canon 16,000 or say it is the updated model with the slave-circuit system which reduced the crew to 2,000.

or something. Not that it really matters. Still a good fic and a good chapter.

Excellent work, the rebellion building is very well done

One think to keep in mind is that there is no way the council wouldn't have warned all Jedi generals about order 66 and those generals also would have started to remove the chips from at least some of their troops so there should be a lot of survivors to pick up or ones constantly arriving on Yavin, though they should split up to avoid detection. I was also wondering what happened to the remainder of the 501st and 212th, they are all chip free and the majority of them wouldn't betray the Jedi. I assume they were stuck on Coruscant, but this means the empire is going to eradicate them or they will take the fleets they were assigned and go onto hiding.

There needs to be more detail regarding Bail's capture, who was holding him, why were they going to release him, how he got captured

Eleven might seem young for a Pantoran, but they actually age much faster mentaly than humans. Chuchi became a senator when she was 13 I think.

thx. have Jinn show tython or what y call it to them

Hawkeye... pilot hawk and trooper Redeye?

Trapper is the only survivor of the gunship crash on geo is is with Obi.

Radar IDK

I think this was a very good story... sad, but good. There were a few things that I would have worded differently, but I could not have done an overall better story. I think there are some things that shouldn't be here, but it is very good.

It's good to have you back. The chapter was nice with Kitani having some struggles to overcome, some obi wan banter, and good attention to detail. My only criticism is that I'm not sure how I feel about Barris escaping a second time. I know it's fitting given the flawed philosophy of the jedi but it also feels somewhat cartoonish having her appear and get beaten each time like a cartoon villain. As long as it doesnt become a thing it shouldn't be a problem though. I wonder if they will meet up with Voss or miss him. Either way he is probably no longer interested in continuing to fight, though they might be able to convince him to help train future jedi in form 7, tracking, etc.

Okay, there’s only one fault I see with this: the clones don’t know what a Base Delta Zero is, because that order was invented by the Empire, not the Republic or Separatists. I don’t want to be that guy, but I just thought to point that out. Besides that, I have no qualms. keep it up!

Okay, this was one helluva chapter, and I loved it! But hold up; was that clone who had the personal log the CLONE WE HEAR TALKING DURING THE BATTLEFRONT 2 (2007) CAMPAIGN!? Dude, if it is, then hats off to you, sir!

Thanks for the new chapter!

Good stuff, as always.