| Reviews for The Hunting Ground |
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hengrimm chapter 1 . 5/2 I love this AU, but I wonder if there's a sequel somewhere. There are a lot of things left unanswered and it seems ripe for more stories. Now, my only knowledge with a Sentinel or Sentinel-like AU comes from the FF story "Between the Dust, Rocks, and Sky There was You" by Elyria7 so I don't know a lot, but this story raises several questions for me: Did the US Marshals find their mole? Whatever happened with the guy who wrote the info Josiah found about Sentinels and Guides? Is a Guardian the same as a Sentinel? Is it something different? Was the assassin a rogue Sentinel or is Guardian something different altogether? How does Vin become ATF and how effective is he? I'm wondering because Vin was rendered helpless and ineffective a couple different times when sensory overload threw him into a zone. Was that because this was brand new for him? Because Chris was too far away to anchor him? Also, sometimes he was okay to be touched, other times it hurt him; is it again a matter of having zoned that made that happen and something that will stabilize once he has practice and experience working with a Guide? Anyway, this is a fascinating M7 ATF AU, and I would love for this to be the first story in a series. Thanks for sharing! |
hengrimm chapter 25 . 5/2 What a fun, awesome story! Once I started reading, I couldn't stop - and have the pissed off animals waiting for the feed to prove it. I loved Peso charging in and saving the day, though wasn't Vin hurt with a knife slash across the chest? I was curious to see what Chris's reaction would be if Vin were to be physically injured, but nothing came of it. Of course, you could fix that and write a continuation of this wonderful M7 ATF AU. I know I would certainly read it! FYI: I see you updated your profile earlier this year and say there's a web address to your personal page but there's no such address/link on the profile page. So, if you do have another story in this AU in your private page, I'd love to read it but need an address to find it. You have to put spaces between words and spell out dot and com, etc... |
atymer chapter 25 . 7/26/2019 This is wonderful. Two of my fav worlds always mix very well. I'm happy I got to read all at once. Had a wonderful time. |
Karen Fliger chapter 25 . 5/31/2019 Loved the story line. Hope to see more stories to follow this one. |
Diggedydog chapter 1 . 3/31/2018 This review is for the whole thing. It was great. I love stories of the last member joining the seven and this was a good one. Keep writing. |
Guest chapter 25 . 3/9/2018 Wonderful story. I hope you decide to continue to write in this universe. After all, Brambilla is still on the loose, with only Alex left alive as a witness. And we also have to find out how Vin will integrate in team 7, And then there's always a meeting with Blair and Jim... The possibilities are endless. :) |
Guest chapter 25 . 2/22/2018 Great ending. I could see the fight in my mind so clearly. Another piece of good writing. But you know of course this calls for a sequel! Linda |
Guest chapter 25 . 2/16/2018 Thank you for finishing this story. I thoroughly enjoyed it and can now sit back and read the entire story start to finish. I do hope you continue with this AU and we see more stories from you in the future. |
JennK528 chapter 25 . 2/13/2018 YAY! You made it! Congrats for getting there. :) Knew you could do it! Nice wrap-up! I liked Peso saving the day. Who's a good horse, then?! |
Laura-trekkie chapter 25 . 2/11/2018 Awww, finished :(. But yay, Vin was brought out of his zone by Chris and they're finally all able to get some rest and recuperation for their collection of injuries. I'm sure Chris will have no trouble adding Vin to the team and they will only get better as their bond matures. |
Cassandra30 chapter 25 . 2/11/2018 Terrific story! I enjoy reading your work. |
PurpleFigment chapter 25 . 2/11/2018 So glad to see your post. While I understand the sentiments behind never posting a WIP again , please know I'll take ff from you anyway I can get it :) I'm also hopeful that your muse and related life will C cooperate in allowing you to write more tales in this au, we need all the M7 x TS stories we can get. Thanks so much for writing and sharing. "Sending " virtual cookies and chocolates to be delivered by the M7 hunk of your choice. You may have to use your imagination to enjoy, but at least they are calorie free! |
lunaz chapter 25 . 2/10/2018 This was a very enjoyable fic to read. Thank you. |
chrisw chapter 25 . 2/10/2018 Loved it from start to finish, especially Peso coming to Vin's defense and saving his life! |
maj chapter 25 . 2/10/2018 Great story! Yeah WIP's are not the greatest, but you have it all done and I totally enjoyed the ride. Now Ia m going to go back and read it all at one time :-) Good work! Looking forward to more! |