Law could perform cosmetic surgery and make her prettier, cough remove the brand cough.

Jeez, it's like you threw her right into impel down. It's difficult and very unfun to read you just torture her and bring so much angst into the story.

I am loving the pace and the lack of drama in the story so far.
I also love how strong you made her and it making sense in the context of being Shankses brood.

I don't think there's a need to introduce character flaws and make her suck at things or the like. The conflict could just be external, like marines hunting her, her hunting pirates, liberating an island, looting an island, recruiting members for her crew and so on.

Tho if the quirks are charming or fun I won't mind.

i am not worried, sex is just sex, but a true relationship is something much more, liking the story and love the twist to the normal self insert.

This is starting to feel lest like a One Piece story and more like a Young Adult drama...

Law's having fun ;)

Luffy's so cute ;)

I hope to read more soon!

Omg I ship her and law now so much.

. fun story.

Lmfao love this 3

Yess I can't wait for more

YESSSSSSS! She met Luffy! I'm so happy right now! I thought for sure that she would meet Ace first, I believe he is the love interest for this fic right (based on the tags... Besides they would bond so well over their daddy issues, pair made in heaven). But I'm kinda happy she's meeting Luffy first. This is going to be so unpredictable with Luffy now thrown in the mix. I really can't wait to see what's going to happen! I hope you update soon! :))

Mara-Chan (o l l o)

so excited for the next chap! what will Rosie teach Luffy? haha

WOOO!