That was beautiful

This fic made me cry, honestly. You did such a great job author. More power to you. Congratulations.

This was beautiful...

You got me crying. It's sad but beautiful story. The songs are perfectly matched. I think I will come back here more than once.

Beautiful.

This is depressing i must say. I on the edge of tears from this... But, it still a good story nonetheless so, keep it up with the good works!

Jesus, do I love this. I've always been a sucker for things that are strange and hurtful and damn-near raw. This is all of that. It's a story within a story, filled with strife at every turn that I can't get enough of. I know that because of this, I too will be up till 4 writing sadness. You have a way with words that I never thought could have a home in the NaLu universe without seeming like something written by sugar-crazed fangirls. Thank you for writing this, and thank you for sharing it with the world.

The song is fit with the storyline and it touch my heart and I'm crying now TT. I was a little confused at first and had to read it a few times because there's Natsu pov too. Anyway, good job and i love this. Will there be more chapter, or just one additional chapter? I like this type of angst. I'll definitely read again whenever i feel like reading some angst.