| Reviews for This Fragile Breath |
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   PutMoneyInThyPurse chapter 3 . 9/21/2017 Ohadofisdf;ogiaesfdo;lSADKF'SAKDFGALS'DF;ALKSDFLZXCV,Z.X This is incredible. Please please please please please... I can't even. You taunt us and hint at the mystery of the cure until you have us on the edge of our seats and dying of suspense. And OHHHH your Toothless wrapping a sick Hiccup in his wings and not sleeping in case "Hiccup would need him during the night" - this is every bit the loving protective pair we see in the series and the movies and I just as;dflkas;dfaoisk;dfalsdkf;aslkdfja;sfd okay? Believe it or not, I actually could hear the sad/dramatic HTTYD theme behind your moments between Astrid and Ryker (the music that plays when Toothless flies away in GotNF, and when Toothless is captured in the arena in HTTYD). You really flesh this out wonderfully, making us see and hear everything as it happens, like an exceptionally good RttE episode. And your Astrid "bitterly" saying 'if you can forgive me'... Jeez, what IS the secret ingredient to the antidote, a Night Fury's heart? (Although if it was, Toothless would just open his wings and offer it...) You really know how to build suspense, and I'm so engrossed in this. PLEASE please please please please give me more. Pretty please. It's amazing. |
| XMoreMinutes chapter 3 . 5/8/2017 This is the best story ever! Seriously, I like most things about it, and it doesn't happen often. I hope Hiccup makes it, and wait till his father finds out about this... oh boi! Have a good day! |
| TheBookRider chapter 3 . 5/2/2017 I am thoroughly DELIGHTED to see I'm not the only person who uses the word idiosyncrasies. It's a beautiful word. (Sorry if this sounds weird. I'm a word nerd.) |
| Godsliltippy chapter 3 . 4/25/2017 I love your story-telling abilities! The flow is great and the emotions are well written! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Thanks so much for sharing this with us! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/4/2017 more hiccup and toothless moments please, like hiccup saying sweet things to toothless before he dies maybe, thanks! |
| Guest23 chapter 3 . 4/4/2017 Please don't make Astrid kill Tootless...or anything like that...nameless dragons are one thing, but you can't hurt toothless...please... |
| Lovetoread89 chapter 3 . 4/5/2017 Argh, what will Astrid do?! I can't wait to find out what happens next, I'm loving this story! I liked the Supernatural reference in chapter 2 by the way, good one :D |
| phieillydinyia chapter 3 . 4/4/2017 WHAT IS SHE GOING TO DO? |
| phieillydinyia chapter 2 . 4/4/2017 WHAT!? eh, I'll keep reading |
| FanWriter02 chapter 3 . 4/3/2017 Oh no... what does this mean? Will they have to kill a dragon or something? 0o0 Cannot wait for more! |
| Dot Katherine Granger chapter 2 . 3/27/2017 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO FOR ODIN'S SAKE THE SUSPENSE PLEASE DO MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE! |
| Scribblefoxx chapter 2 . 3/26/2017 wow, this chapter is great! I really love the other riders' reactions, and Hiccup's characterization feels spot-on. I'm loving this story so far! |
| AquaJinx chapter 2 . 3/26/2017 Meatlug's female. Not sure if you know this or just changed it for the story, it's sometimes hard to tell. :P |
| FanWriter02 chapter 2 . 3/26/2017 I love this story! Keep up the great work! :D |
| guest chapter 1 . 3/23/2017 people say between the brothers viggo was the smart one, this little stunt proves just how much that means, make the other guy have to look for the cure by afflicting him with the same, diabolically genius move. this is a very promising start and i'm excited to see where this is headed. |
