Reviews for A Gamer's Soul |
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Shuten chapter 9 . 7/16/2018 Moorreee I DEMAND MORE |
Guest chapter 9 . 11/15/2017 Nice |
Guest chapter 9 . 7/26/2017 Please update! This is a great story |
davycrockett100 chapter 9 . 6/17/2017 awesome job |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/15/2017 MORE! |
ladybug02 chapter 9 . 5/7/2017 that was awesome! I really want to read the next chapter. ;3 |
ladybug02 chapter 2 . 5/7/2017 :3 awesome ;3 |
DeliciousCookie chapter 2 . 5/2/2017 How did he gain 3 levels from a level 2 mob? Also just a important tip: the way gamer's mind is used in fanfiction is often a negative influence on the mc. It's commonly used as a crutch for inexperienced writers and basically denies any character growth/development at all. I would recommend getting rid of the first half(or at least not turn him into a robot) and just allow the second one with the status effects. Anyway I'm liking more bleach gamer fics, at this point the fanfic haven't given any warning signs which is positive. The grammar is also alright. |
One of my fav chapter 9 . 4/28/2017 One of my favorite gamer stories out there right now, waiting faithfully for update! |
Blazing heart frigid soul chapter 9 . 4/29/2017 That was fun and short |
SneakyDevil chapter 1 . 4/28/2017 Good job on spelling and grammar, no real errors to be found. Good on you for not doing the idiotic thing of "HEY THIS IS MY CHACHTER THIS SI WHAT HTEY LOOK LIEK THIS SIS WHAT HTYE ARE WEARING" one paragraph into the story. Can't offer much more criticism though, the chapter just didn't hold my interest as it was fairly generic and gave me no reason to keep reading. |
Lexus-Regis chapter 8 . 4/20/2017 good chapter please update more |
sonle chapter 8 . 4/20/2017 thanks for sharing! |
sonle chapter 6 . 4/20/2017 interesting concept |
sonle chapter 2 . 4/20/2017 thumbs up |