Good work exploring the son in law/father un law Maurice..I wish my father was like but lovable.A sexy man like Adam doesnt hurt all are not as lucky as Belle sadly.

Really liked your dialogue!

Another wonderful piece of writing. I feel like there are a lot of insightful, interesting little scenes and conversations that could be had between these two characters, both from the animated film and the remake, and that they haven't been explored in fanfiction nearly enough. I'm so pleased that you did, and so well. You captured this new Maurice brilliantly.

Liked your story.

Fun story! I like the idea of Genius Belle getting set free.