It's Edinburgh, not Edenborough

Hi, I love this story but I think I noticed a few mistakes through some previous chapters, so sometime when your bored you might want to go over you story and check.

What were the two words?

like the story so far. one things bugging me though. the repeated misspelling of Edinburgh.

Let me guess. F you?

Good chapter i hope you have claire call mcgee, ziva, and abby out on everything they do when tony is team leader hated the way he was treated then

nicely done with the Gibbs getting blown up

Good talk with Claire and she is right, Tony should just be Tony

I love this story great idea but one thing I've noticed that I don't really like is Claire noticing stuff, and gets more credit then tony does just don't think that should be the case being tony is more experienced, and Gibbs SFA should notice stuff just as much Maybe more

This as well as shalom will be interesting hope you have Claire not treat Tony like crap when he's in charge maybe even give McGee, ziva and Abby a piece of her mind after Gibbs comes back (tony is the sfa so he should be in charge) always had a big problem with way McGee, ziva and Abby treated tony while he was in charge when all he tried to do was make keep the team together and not make things seem too different then when Gibbs was in charge.

I like how you setup Hiatus.

I do find it weird how Gibbs treats Claire compared to tony since tiny is second in command but we saw some of that on ncis too anyway great chapter love the tony centered episodes update soon

update please i love it

Liked Gibbs in role of Director for this one.
Glad Tony was able to get this diffused without blowing the kid up.

Love Claire in the room with the kids.