my nigga if you read of this I beg of you please continue this story I just downloaded it and I'm hyped like seriously please continue this is not a wast of potential.

I just binge read this. It's so good! I'm loving the slow Archer reveals. Now that Keiichi saw the last dream in the sequence Archer will probably be confronted. I'm really enjoying this. I hope it isn't dead, that would be a shame. Archer's rant at the end gave me chills (the good kind, like when you listen to epic music.)
Anyways, keep up the great work! I hope that you update this soon!

Very interesting fan fiction, i hope there is more chapters in the future. and good luck with whatever you may be doing

Great story, I look forward to the next chapter

The odd thing here is that it seems you are using Servant Archer but it was clear from chapter one that this should be EMIYA, who was sent by Alaya meaning he is empowered by Alaya.

This is really good, it includes Archer in a way that seems natural, and it's the rare type of crossover that mixes characters from two different series without having one side overshadow the other, all in all, Great with a capital G.

Awesome story, when's the next chapter going up, I hope to see more soon.

This is honestly one of the most interesting and well written crossovers that I've read in a very long time. Very interested in where the story is going and I can't wait to see where you take the story. Took me about a day to read it all and I am not regretful in the least.

Hope to see more soon as this has quickly become one of my favorite stories on the site, so thanks for writing it and sharing.

It's realy gooood

This story is interesting. Odd that it's not all that popular.

The fight scenes were quite nice, especially given that this was your first attempt at a primarily action chapter. If there was one thing that could've been handled a bit better was to shift the attention from Hild's fight from the unnamed gods to the Slenderman, and maybe add more detail to Urd's own fight. But that's nitpicking and by no means implies that the rest wasn't good enough (especially Archer's own fight towards the end).

The real question now is what's going to happen from now on. So, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work!

Good long chapter! The fight scene has a good portrayal enough for me to imagine how it goes. The convo between Archer and Bell are so nice and very true to what could have happened with their personality.

awesome chapter

Great chapter!

i dont like the dream circle in your fiction... it kind of makes Archer look like an attention whore, and everyone has to feel sorry for him and his past .