this is pretty good

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Hmmm you could of made the final chapter bigger and revealed more of everybodys reaction to the moon and what everyone was doing years later. Why just serafall and gray

Why don't you proof read your story. I see nothing but fragment, spelling and grammar issues

This story is a mess little explanation for things and the things that do have flashbacks which is super unnecessary stop flashing to the past so often it's ok sometimes but as a device you are using it too much also people accept naruto's presence too easily

Yay! You Put in an epilogue log, are you going to go to fairytail from there?

Is naruto going to return somewhere in future chapters or it's all about gray and others?

Tried reading this fic, but faced a few problems.

The idea is good, but the first few chapters the scene jumps from one place to the next without prompt, the plot line progresses but are must assume where it's at instead or a prompt or a snippet of the events.

another issue is that the story feels like it's the original, but with some extra stuff added to make issei's like easier.

there are few more minor issues so they won't be mentioned.

I think the first issue would probably get better as the story progresses and the author gains experience, but the second problem is a deal breaker for me. in a fic like this, you can let the canon play out and have naruto and the other new characters do their own thing away from them (which will eventually affect cannon), or you can tell canon go fuck yourself and write your own thing.

if the content is the same as the original but with a few extra additions that don't affect the plot and everything plays out the same then there is no point to it. you should explore the emotional aspect, the world or anything really. the point of a fanfic (or rather a good one) is to add more to the original work, or use the existing world to create your own story.

What happen to alucard, why didnt he get a fight scene.

why did you hype the sin's up only for them to be this weak

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Please do a crossover special with this seven deadly sins and the anime.

So Goku is basically escanor lol I'm really looking forward to the enemies reaction to Goku's power

Can I say I kinda wanna serafall end up a waitress at Naruto bar even has a copy of Elizabeth uniform

perhaps have the underworld make a seven deadly sins tv show with the sins voicing themselves and serafall also a character

I'm curious will there be a ten commandment arc obviously made to fit with dxds world also will Roy do what he did to envy in FMA brotherhood