Since the parents received life in prison then you changed it to them being released after a year of community service you should have removed the life sentence part in Chapter 11.

I think the pets should of had a turn to morn Lincoln

Is Clyde the son of a pimp named slickback, if so is Lynn his bottom bitch because that sure is how he slapped her

Damn Clyde slapped Lynn like he was a pimp and she's the hoe that didn't come back with all his money.

Is Clyde the son of a pimp named slickback, if so is Lynn his bottom bitch because that sure is how he slapped her .

I had to get a gmail account because my phone said this site wouldn't accept guest reviews

Great ending

Great story

what was the point in making the new baby a girl? wouldn't it being a boy be more fitting?

Hey, it's been a while. I don't know why it took me so long to finally say this but I'm glad that you continued and completed the story you first started about two years ago. Even though one person adopted this story but gave up only for another to take it only to have done nothing with it yet, I'm glad that you took the reins once more. This was actually one of the first stories I've read before I even joined. And I really hope you're doing better in life and get everything you need to be happy.

so Lincoln dies and the Louds live happily ever after, not sure how I feel about that

And now there are 2 completed versions of this troubled fic, as well as 1 deleted version.

I believe you once posted a summary of how you intended for this story to end, and for what I can remember, this final version doesn't differ too much. Thank you for finishing it, although the ending can come of as bit rushed.

Now, for your next idea: I have not yet seen the movie Doctor Sleep, but I read the book. I do know that, like usual, there are quite some differences between book and novel.

Think Haiku could try and reconnect with Lucy? She probably won’t forgive her for what she didc but she can understand she already feels horrible about everything.

RobbyA, you have my permission to use my OC, Jake "Shreeky" Short. In the next chapter, could you have him defeat Adam, rescue Lola, his love interest, before she suffers Lincoln's fate; and afterwards become a couple and let everyone else know they are in a romantic relationship?
P.R. Jake is the only non-Loud classmate that defends Lola and has an IMMENSE crush on her.

bring the bau into the mix

Glad to see this getting continued.

It looks like life is moving on for the Louds, but I though that the parents were sentience to life in prison. Anyway I'm not sure I like the idea of on them having another child after what happen to Lincoln.

I think Lola going to get out of this alive. Keep up the good work.