Hay le va...no quiero que Sakura-chan se vaya.

Already I can see this is going to be a failure of a story. You have singlehandededly forced canon, for things to remain the exact same. Not only that, but you’re butchering and forcing a character and their personality to be dull and lifeless so as to do so. Honestly, the summary had me interested but you’ve completely fucked that with your actual content. And seeing other reviews that aren’t vapid ego stroking refuse, I most definitely don’t want to read more of the same shit.

Thanks for the update! I really like the interactions between Sakura and Reborn. I'm really curious as to how this is going to proceed, so please continue writing!

*Keeps Navi away

Me encantaaaa cai fascinada por otro story tuyo, espero los siguientes capitulos,
Continous please,
La relacion entre ambas maravillosa y con los demas , es un buen cross over!

My biggest problem with this is that it just doesn't feel like Sakura. She's a girl with grit and determination in spades, trained by one of the most talented and hard assed women in the world to take ass and kick names with medical knowledge.

This...isn't Sakura. This is a Chrome shaped shell with Sakura accessories. It just reeks of justifications to keep the plot near the rails to me. Which I can't really be upset about because taking things off the rails is very hard to plot out. But it does make things feel a bit artificial.

Maybe a part of that is that you have a very ethereal and floaty writing style. It works for me when a character is depressed and just coasting without engaging in life like this Sakura is apparently doing, but after 12 chapters of not a hint of her old self poking through I'm kind of concerned it's going to be like that the whole fic.

I've never been so happy reading 'steady' and 'update' in the same sentence now. Thank you for the chap and keep up the good work

I've never been so happy reading 'steady' and 'update' in the same sentence now. Thank you for the chap and keep up the good work

Though to be fair her only real friend her age from childhood till shippuden was only Ino and a one sided Naruto.

I only just noticed this after rereading this story for the twentieth time, but 'Her hand instinctively flies for her scythe but she knows there should not be any intruders.' - Chrome has a scythe? not a trident? lol, it would be cool though :3 I can't seem to get in my head whether Chrome's trident is real or an illusion... where would she buy a trident? and was it Mukuro's - if his was even real not an illusion - but if Mukuro's trident is real is Chrome holding it for him while he's in Vendicare?

loved this chapter and the story itself! can't wait for future chapters!

Oh sweet, sweet character development. Love this!

hey hope you both are being safe !

Quite nice dialogues and introspection, hoping you're safe.

I’m very excited for this story! It’s so different from a regular reincarnation fic. I particularly appreciate how well you describe Sakura’s mental situation with Nagi and Mukuro. I cannot wait to see everyone’s reaction when she finally uses Chakra. Thanks for the great read. Please keep up the great work!