Very neat solution, Mr Darcy!

Really liked the story until I reached the end. Compromising a young woman like that was not a pretty sight. After that little stunt the numbers would be 8/8 with the side effect of tarinishing her sisters reputation in the process. However I liked the story, before this major mistake.

Thanks for sharing this story. It was cute and sweet.

ooooohhh my, what a satisfying way to deal with the situation! A more satifying one, I might say, but then that might be because the cannon way is a lot more convoluted until they figure out where they gave each other wrong impressions

I love it! so awesome!

I'm feeling weird stuff in my stomach guys... is it love?

Great fun!

Wow! I didn’t see that coming!

!Que historia mas sabrosa y suavecita! Parabienes!

I love this story, but it needs at least another chapter. :-)

I have just read some of your fictions and I have to write that I like them very much, I have decided to read them all because you are one of my favorite authors, I like your humour, your intelligence and your renewed imagination (it is a challenge to maintain our interest with the constraint of the same dramatic plot) really well done!

Absolutely loved this. Thanks.

Thank you for sharing! This is beautiful. And funny, too.

OMG! I read all of your stories in a few days, you are amazing! Amei, esse com certeza seria um final bem mais simples para o romance, mas não deixa de ser fofo e doce e romântico. Sei que já faz tempo, mas se quiser continuar a história eu com certeza leria.

Original, fun and cute! Netherfield ball revisited!
Thank you