This is a wonderful story, it is a shame there is not more

I love this story! It is one of the best of its kind and most certainly a lot more deserving of praise than a lot of the mos well recived stories. (If you want to change that I suggest getting another profile picture for it :D. This one screams innocence and sappy romance.)

I hope you find your way back to this story. So many possibilities Harry's soul combo team mixed with grendiwalds dueling abilities. A new voldy a draco-tom combo. Thanks for sharing

Awesome

Very good chapter, i hope you update another soon!

i hope you continue this fic is amazing wonderfuu i love Harry smart or ravenclaw i'm impatient to read more a new chapter soon, please?

A very peculiar writing style, a bit heavy perhaps, but interesting nonetheless.
The story is nothing too original, but mixing it with your prose and a hundred little details you created a real gem.
I do hope to see this finished someday.

Continue please!

I love the little insightful details you include - the descriptions you write are so provoking and lovely. Harry is written so beautifully as a meld of magic and people, and it was definitely worth staying up and reading all of this.

that "never spill blood in l front of a goblin you don't trust" line is pretty dark in the context of fanficdom where everyone's always dropping three drops on some parchment to check their heritage. That's a sneaky little send up. This story's so well written and dense with meanings, even the lore details do extra work metatextually.

Tom will be Voldemort's own undoing, between the bit that integrated with Harry, and the pissed-off diary there's a lot of room for shenanigans. Bathilda's a cool old lady, and a genuinely nice one at that.

Clever. Original. A shame that it sits unfinished.

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I dearly love the way you have with words in descriptions

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