will there be more chapters ?

That's a really interesting idea but i just can't read it, i'm really sorry but there just waaaaay too much grammar error, i just can't. I hope for a rewritte soon and maybe getting a beta reader who can help you. Once again that I can't go beyond first chapter.

buroli: father

broly: yes son

buroli: who is kakarot

broly: KAKAROT, KAKAROT

Great story please continue it soon.

bra my native language is german and Roman and i have pretty much mastered English with 15 always those normies can't even write in english

Read the first chapter. Not planning on reading the rest. Complete shit.

Grammar! Is English your second or third language?

Study Grammer. Read more.

Broly power maximum.

Broly sees Goku vs black Goku and hears how zamasu stole his body

I can't read this story without LOSING MY SHIT! The grammar is complete ASS and the storyline is just straight BULLSHIT. I don't know if your mental problems or not but you got to knock this shit off. Go back to school and take a couple English classes before you come back to the site fucking retard! And your viewers encourage this garbage of a fanfic like "can't wait till the next chapter! please update" are you guys being serious! this is absolute shite

I like the premise of the story, but i couldn't read it without cringing, i have meet ten year old's with better grammar than you, and one of them didn't have english as their first language. But of you have a legitimate reason medical or otherwise then i apologize. But if you have a formal education, are over the age of 10, and have no metal disabilities then you are a complete idiot

Burori fight along with Vegito SSB to defeat Black and Zamasu .uhm it will be awesome. please keep update please keep update please keep update please keep update please keep update please keep update Will Burori and Trunks fusion to ? i mean both of them are half blood saiyan... it will be half prince blood and half legendary blood... In addition, Trunks will get Super Saiyan Rage and it will make their fusion become more powerful

Burori X kail aka the female legendary Super Saiyan and he should get his parents back with the Dragon Balls or Super dragon balls

best story ever

Please keep updating. I love this story so much. Why to become legendary if you can become beyond god, right?
Make him can control combination of legendary ki and god ki which is his father can't. Owning that unique energy can make him so powerful plus he can use chakra.