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Nice chapter, just hope erika doesn't die i kinda like her.

Welcome Back

Marvelous

...That is it, we need to talk

A work of art

Beautiful

Oh my god...

Nicely made

Good god...

Not bad at all

Most interesting

I like the plot and the theme of this story. Much more details is needed in the scenes, however. I would strongly suggest not trying to fight the whole war in a few chapters. At the moment it reads more like a documentary. You need to get more character details into scenes. Instead of a few paragraphs for a battle, should be a chapter or more. Longer scenes help build the story as well as allow you to give the characters more depth.
CH 6, 'A brief reunion' was indeed WAY too brief. We meet Azusa, her and her crew dies half a chapter later, so, who was that again? The meeting, collection of the tankers, and getting at least a good idea of who they are, should gave been the entire chapter by it'self, and longer than the entire chapter currently is.

The historically accuracy you show is good, but what these are should be in the story, not just as footnotes. IE: Maly Trosrtenets - Katayusha and Nonna discovering what happened themselves and finding out this was a death camp through a much longer scene would impact the story (and the characters) more than the few short lines where Kat already somehow knows all about it.

I’ve enjoyed this one. I’d do better if some of the moments in the story were more elaborated and some of the grammatical and punctuation errors were fixed but otherwise a well put-together story. The elements of the story that are tied into some real-world events and conspiracies are very much appreciated.

Looking forward to more.

Very interesting story. It's pretty solid other than a few grammatical mistakes and I hope to see more in the future.

Also, I saw on your profile that you're new on this site and I'd like to say welcome to Fanfic.