Noice.

That was some nice bonding between the two and you gave some nice backstory of Silver before he became a cyborg (you nailed his way of speech).

Nice to see that Silver has enough humanity in him to open up to Jim setting up the close relationship of the film.

Great writing as always! :-)

I really love how you write for Silver. He is an amazing character and you are so good with him :) Thanks!

Awesome story!

Excellent story, I really liked it!

This woulda been better than the supernova scene in te movie I looove it!

Aw... I loved this story so much. It had such a depth, I thought I could reach out and touch it. I could feel the bond between these two. Thanks for making it so realistic. :D

-hides skewer behind back, shifty eyed-

dunno what you're talking about.

this was incredibley in character. i am blown away. although if i ever see twenty feet of snow, i'll prob'ly die of excitement.

-lives in arizona-

XD

signed,

onewhowatches :3

this was a great fanfic, i liked it a lot.

im sorry hun but your story was really dull. i mean it was a great story line ande all but nothin happened but a storm came and silver said he had had a bad experiance with one BORING!

Greta Job!

Dear Bonet
It's nice! I really like the way you picture the crew of the Legacy having some recreational games. One thing that may be lacking is some spectator, but it's allright.
You also imply Silver's past related to an Ether Storm, and it's nicely included in the story... not explicit, but quite tangible.
GBU

Awesome! You have really out done yourself) Why couldn't this scene have been in the real movie? Ha ha! Keep up the good work!

Fantastic! You have certainly have out done yourself) Why couldn't have this been in the real movie? Ha ha! Keep up the good work!

Fantastic! You have certainly have out done yourself) Why couldn't have this been in the real movie? Ha ha! Keep up the good work!