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N. A. Wennerholm chapter 1 . 11/20/2019 When I read stuff like this regarding SHIELD I seriously want to beat the shit out of them. Then lock most of them up for life. Then force the others to take an oath that is binding to make sure they obey the Heavenly Father's Laws along with other laws as long as they Don't violate the Creators laws. The creator who is also the Heavenly Father. Plus the English equivalent of The Hebrew Characters of the Father's name is YHWH. And as many will say based on The Scriptures of many of the Other religions around the world as long as they really do their homework and research will realize that All the Pantheons are Answerable to YHWH the only things are that many have disobeyed The Creator of all. And many of the various races are in very deep trouble or as some would say deep doo-doo for the things they have done. |
Farsoul chapter 1 . 11/7/2019 Oh this is brilliant! The world definitely needs more tholorry. Yum! |
LunaLovegood201 chapter 1 . 10/31/2019 Wait, Sheild kidnapped him, and they decide to stay, and then start arguing? |
andjelija.nenic chapter 1 . 6/13/2019 Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$ |
sexy Seren chapter 1 . 7/24/2018 Interesting |
Animefreak347346 chapter 1 . 7/23/2018 *He |
Animefreak347346 chapter 1 . 7/23/2018 Why was this rated m? GE said cum once and they made out. It was more t. |
Wolvie26 chapter 1 . 7/12/2018 this has the potential to be a really good multi chapter story. I hope one day you can add to it, but it is a good story as is too. |
AlexAjTi chapter 1 . 5/3/2018 Yesn |
mfaerie32 chapter 1 . 4/3/2018 It would be so cool if you expanded this universe. ) |
Catchfire chapter 1 . 1/26/2018 I would love to see this continued into either a very big fic. Or into some more short one shots. You could write about Harry and the avengers showing midgard Earth to Thor and Loki. I'd love to see one introducing Thor to an IMAX movie. Or maybe 3d. You could do an entire light-hearted series just based on showing new things to Thor and Loki. Maybe since none of the Avengers ever got to have a normal childhood and family they could do the stereo typical things any family does. Which then more or less blows up in their faces in hilarious ways. Here's a few ideas you're free to use or not use as you wish. Zoo trip. Thor arm wrestling a gorilla, Loki as a bird perch for various beautiful tropical birds in the aviary. Thor carrying a farmyard animal like a goat or sheep or cow tucked under his arm like a puppy so he can show it to the others. Clint chased by a chicken. Thor trying to get Loki to pet the animals, Tony agreeing to pay for the animals therapy and Bruce, Natasha and Harry leaning against a fence watching the chaos and eating conjured popcorn. Imax movie. Tony spills the beans on how movies are a great date place for making out. Then Tony has to explain making out to Thor. Once at the movies, which luckily Tony completely rented out except for an older couple who already had seats they refused to give up, Thor announces to the world but mainly Loki that you are supposed to make out during the movie. Then promptly sits down and drags Loki into his lap. Where they proceed to make out. When they're chasticed some the older couple comes to their defense and says it's cute. Then also proceed to make out. Homemade pizza dough, Thor learning to throw dough and Loki walking in at the right moment to end up with a dough hat. Where he promptly turns to Bruce and asks if he would like to go out somewhere quiet to eat and talk. Then both teleport wherever. Ok I talk/type way to much. Feel free to use or not use any ideas or to pass them on. I'd love to hear about all the different ways the team has run across Harry before. I'd also love to see some more of the trio making out too. As well as just being loving to one another. |
Padfootette chapter 1 . 9/18/2017 Loved it |
LoVeInVaInTrYsTiLl chapter 1 . 9/11/2017 cute |
9551832-Delete-account-please chapter 1 . 8/12/2017 That was good and funny. |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/17/2017 Please update as soon as possible |